[M.B X] [PG-13] Satan Girl Chikyuuban

[M.B X]

[font="Times New Roman"][size="2"][center][IMG]http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii203/simple001_album/CHI.jpg[/IMG]

I realize this card is sorta OP'ed, but i guess if it was released it would be Semi'ed or Limited

Rate, comment etc... Just leave me some feedback.
Thanks for looking

Note = If you find the random stats a bit uncanny, just remember Caste of Dark Illusions & Reaper of the Cards.[/center][/size][/font]

[Lexadin]

Wow, how OP!
I really mean it, its like a combination of all good Zombie monsters. It would be lucky to even get limited. But I would rather think it will go straight into ban.
The pic also doesn't really look like a Zombie, a Fiend you could have pulled of but not a Zombie.
Though the random stats, do make up for it a little bit.
A 6.1/10

[M.B X]

Well, i think we have established that its OPed.
So why dont you just give some proper CnC, okay?

But, thanks anyway.
Its just that you have no idea how much time and how much thought it took to make.

And FTW it is a Zombie. Chikyuuban = Blood-Sucker.

[Lord Ursus]

You are complimented for the sweetness of the way you made this.

It is overpowered...

However, the part that returns it to your hand reduces your tempo a bit, but it's a neat way to balance it.

I'd edit the effect so you can only search up a monster when it is sent from your hand to the graveyard, meaning it's absolutely BONKERS in Fabled.

I really don't like stats like that, due to troublesome calculations, though I will not let a personal opinion get in the way of your score.

The image is nice, though a PG should perhaps be added.

This card would be absolutely insane in the meta.

All in all, a creative, yet a tad too strong card.

G.

[Prince Dusk]

Yes, it is OP, but not terribly IMO. If it's removed from play, it's completely useless. Plus your opponent could attack you directly with some cards. They don't [i]have[/i] to select this card as an attack target. Once again, I think it's not that OP, but certainly not balanced either. Alright card. BTW, I like the pic.

[M.B X]

[quote name='Lord Ursus' timestamp='1285874398' post='4669016']
You are complimented for the sweetness of the way you made this.

It is overpowered...

However, the part that returns it to your hand reduces your tempo a bit, but it's a neat way to balance it.

I'd edit the effect so you can only search up a monster when it is sent from your hand to the graveyard, meaning it's absolutely BONKERS in Fabled.

I really don't like stats like that, due to troublesome calculations, though I will not let a personal opinion get in the way of your score.

The image is nice, though a PG should perhaps be added.

This card would be absolutely insane in the meta.

All in all, a creative, yet a tad too strong card.

G.
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Thanks man. Ill consider changing some stuffs.
Also, i will change the part when it is sent from hand and field and make it hand only.

And about the PG thing, ill add that to the title. I guess that zombie outfit is a bit showy lol!

[quote name='Prince Dusk' timestamp='1285884105' post='4669495']
Yes, it is OP, but not terribly IMO. If it's removed from play, it's completely useless. Plus your opponent could attack you directly with some cards. They don't [i]have[/i] to select this card as an attack target. Once again, I think it's not that OP, but certainly not balanced either. Alright card. BTW, I like the pic.
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Thanks for the feedback

EDIT: lol i just realized something, i think i found a loop hole...

Mass Driver or Cannon Soldier + this on the field and a Zombie/Fiend in your hand. Tribute this with MS or CS and activate its effect and add 1 Zombie or Fiend from Graveyard then use its effect summon and repeat until you win, Burn Damage. I guess i it is broken, ill change that and add some restrictions, maybe that will do it :/