updated Espeon and Umbreon, with a few others..

[nikkuhhmillz]

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The deck things are off, i'll fix them later on some.
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feedback please. (:

just realized i miss the type on thunderstone. my bad. it should be a thunder.

[Time Psyduck]

Not bad, although I can't see a reason for Thunderstone to be a monster - it's not in any way sentient, nor does it have any special properties, aside from giving off the radiation that evolves Pikachu and Eevee. I would have imagined it to be an equip, or otherwise a normal (or even quick-play) spell that evolved Eevee, rather than it being Jolteon's effect.

OCG fixes, as well as a few more comments:

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Espeon:
"Eevee" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can select and destroy one monster on the field with a Level equal or lower to this monster, and gain Life Points equal to either the ATK or DEF of the destroyed monster.
('you can' makes it optional, otherwise you would have to destroy a monster, and if your opponent didn't have any monsters you'd have to destroy one of your own. I'd suggest you limit it to either ATK or DEF, not a choice of either, to simplify it)

Umbreon:
"Eevee" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 "Eevee" from your Graveyard and 1 Level 5 or lower monster from your deck. This card cannot declare an attack during the turn you activate this effect. If you control a face-up "Espeon" this card can attack your opponent directly.
(Summoning level 5's from your deck is a bit much. Level 4's would be better, or if you really want the ability to get an instant Espeon, restrict it by ATK (there are already level 5 monsters with 0 attack, so it will work even if you don't make another one.) Also, say 'this card' rather than "Umbreon", as using the card name means the effect applies to all umbreons, meaning in this case if you have 2 you can't use the effect of one and attack with the second)

I don't really like Eevee's text for some reason, but I'm not sure of what the text on normal monsters is supposed to be like, so I'll leave it for someone who is.

Jolteon:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 face-up "Eevee" you control equipped with "Thunderstone". Once per turn, you can discard 2 cards to destroy 1 monster on the field.
(It's fine, just needed the grammar tweaked slightly.)

Thunderstone:
Once per turn, you can equip this card to an "Eevee" you control, OR unequip it to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this effect, the equipped monster cannot be destroyed by battle (Damage Calculation is applied normally). When this card is removed from the field, you can Special Summon 1 "Eevee" from your ___. (A monster can only by equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.)
(You need to say where the Eevee comes from, and it needed the last effect of union monsters, but other than that it's OK besides grammar tweaks. I'm still dubious of it being a monster though)
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[Мερhilεs]

[color="#FF0000"][b][center]Jolteon is posted twice... and it has a mark on the picture. You should find another pic.

Eevee's flavor text could be a little better.[/center][/b][/color]

[nikkuhhmillz]

thanks guys. i've been trying to really focus on the effects, and it's not easy finding a good jolteon picture, and tips?