Daft Innovation Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 [center][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/5997/287554.jpg[/img][/center] A recent contest entry for the 'YCM Survivor' contest. Credits to Wanderly, who left a while ago... So yeah, comment and rate. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomisntblue Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 Very good. But a longer effect would make it better (jk). I like it, simple and usable, 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daft Innovation Posted October 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 [quote name='tomisntblue' timestamp='1285899865' post='4670262'] Very good. But a longer effect would make it better (jk). I like it, simple and usable, 8/10. [/quote] Thanks bro. Is there something lacking that made me lost 2 points? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomisntblue Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 [quote name='Daft Innovation' timestamp='1285901461' post='4670311'] Thanks bro. Is there something lacking that made me lost 2 points? [/quote] No nothing's lacking. I reserve rating 10 for cards that blow my mind. As for way 8 and 9, I don't have a tangible reason for it 8 just felt like the right number to rate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 Image and Name made me barf... Well not really but it's making me feel like doing so. I don't understand why it's a FIRE monster, EARTH could make some more sense here. How can you return it when it's already been Tributed? Make sure to add on "You can return this card from your Graveyard to your hand." Effect is simple, but really not that helpful in the current metagame. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daft Innovation Posted October 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 [quote name='tomisntblue' timestamp='1285901752' post='4670316'] No nothing's lacking. I reserve rating 10 for cards that blow my mind. As for way 8 and 9, I don't have a tangible reason for it 8 just felt like the right number to rate it. [/quote] Oh, I see. Thanks again. [quote name='King.' timestamp='1285901894' post='4670319'] Image and Name made me barf... Well not really but it's making me feel like doing so. [b]I would understand the name, but why is the pic bad?[/b] I don't understand why it's a FIRE monster, EARTH could make some more sense here. [b]Fire Dragon Warrior makes sense.[/b] How can you return it when it's already been Tributed? Make sure to add on "You can return this card from your Graveyard to your hand." [b]Oh, sorry. Thanks for the correction.[/b] Effect is simple, but really not that helpful in the current metagame. [b]Any way to make it useful?[/b] [/quote] Thanks for the constructive criticism bro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wrathos Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 [quote name='King.' timestamp='1285901894' post='4670319'] Effect is simple, but really not that helpful in the current metagame. [/quote] Let's all only make cards for the current meta. If it isn't valuable in a X-Saber deck it isn't worth posting on this forum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M.B X Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 [quote name='Daft Innovation' timestamp='1285927440' post='4670611']Thanks for the [s]constructive[/s] criticism bro. [/quote] That is not Constructive Criticism, that's just Criticism :/ And the effect should be like this... OCG FIX: This card is also treated as a Dragon-Type monster. If this is used a Tribute for a Tribute Summon of a Warrior or Dragon-Type monster, you can return it to its owners hand instead of sending it to the Graveyard. I know that the name is not that bad, but can be much better try Dragonic Warrior or Draco Fighter, just use your imagination The pic also can be better but i like it. My rating based on balance and creativity: 6/10. Partly Good, fix the card and i might raise that a bit. Hope i helped, keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daft Innovation Posted October 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 [quote name='M.B X' timestamp='1285928325' post='4670622'] That is not Constructive Criticism, that's just Criticism :/ [b]Lol.[/b] And the effect should be like this... OCG FIX: This card is also treated as a Dragon-Type monster. If this is used a Tribute for a Tribute Summon of a Warrior or Dragon-Type monster, you can return it to its owners hand instead of sending it to the Graveyard. [b]Damn, that is a lot better. Thanks bro![/b] I know that the name is not that bad, but can be much better try Dragonic Warrior or Draco Fighter, just use your imagination The pic also can be better but i like it. [b]Dragon Warrior sounds meh, I know. I really couldn't think of a decent title though tbqh.[/b] My rating based on balance and creativity: 6/10. Partly Good, fix the card and i might raise that a bit. Hope i helped, keep it up. [b]Cheers bro.[/b] [/quote] Fack. This must be the worst card I've made so far. D: You covered everything. That's great. I better start editing my card... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 you just had to make it a warrior/dragon support didn't you? i would've totally run this in an ancient gear deck if it were for machines. excellent support, and good job daf, (for a new member of course, you still need improving). 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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