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[spoiler=Monster(8) ] [img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/4888/291097.jpg[/img]
While this card remain face up on the field every time the effect of a Continuous Spell or Trap card you control resolves gain 300 Life Points.

[img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/4888/291097.jpg[/img]
This card is unaffected by your opponent's Spell Cards. When this card is Normal Summoned add 1 "Magic School 101" card from your Deck to your hand.

[img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/1323/291097fm.jpg[/img]
While this card is Face up on the field Spell or Trap cards with " Magic School " in their name cannot be destroyed by your opponent's card effects.

[img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8929/291097i.jpg[/img]
You can tribute 1 Spellcaster-Type monster on your side of the field and discard 1 Spell card from your hand to Special Summon this monster.This monster cannot declare an attack on the turn you activate this effect:Once per turn, negate the activation of 1 Spell card your opponent activates.

[img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/9194/291097w.jpg[/img]
You can tribute 1 Spellcaster-Type monster on your side of the field and discard 1 Trap card from your hand to special summon this monster.This monster cannot declare an attack on the turn you activate this effect: Once per turn, Negate the activation of 1 Trap card your opponent activates.

[img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/9467/291097u.jpg[/img]
If this card is in the graveyard when the effect of a Continuous Trap or Spell card resolves, you can send the Trap or Spell card to the Graveyard to Special Summon this card. This cards effect can only be used once per Duel.

[img]http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/1470/291097e.jpg[/img]
While this card remain face up on the field increase the ATK of all Spellcaster-Type monsters on the field, other than this card, by 300. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to add 1 "Black Magic" card from your deck to your hand. When this card is sent fro the field to the graveyard you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower Spellcaster-Type monster from your hand with "Magic School" in its name.

[img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/3279/291097q.jpg[/img]
This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. When this monster declares an attack you can add 1 Spell or Trap card from your Graveyard to your hand that includes " Magic School" in its name.
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[spoiler=Spells(6)]
[img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/2955/291097p.jpg[/img]
You can only activate this card if you control at least 1 level 5 or higher Spellcaster-Type monster. When you activate this card choose 1 of the following effects.

* Switch all monsters on your opponent control to defense position.
* Send 1 card you opponent controls back to the owner's deck, then the selected card's owner draws 1 card.

[img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/2497/291097zd.jpg[/img]
You must control a level 5 or higher Spellcaster-Type monster to Activate this card. Until your opponent's 2nd End Phase after this card is activated your opponents monster's cannot declare an attack the turn they were summoned.

[img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/2070/291097b.jpg[/img]
You can only activate this card when their are 3 or more Spellcaster-Type monsters on your side of the field.Flip all face down monsters face up(flip effects are not activated at this time)Remove all non-Spellcaster-Type monsters on the field from play, then remove from play 1 Spellcaster-Type monster on your side of the field.

[img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/1827/291097mk.jpg[/img]
While this card remain face up on the field any damage done to your Life Points by a Spell or Trap card that you control is reduced to 0. If you do not not control at least 1 Spellcaster type monster send this card to the graveyard.

[img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/2449/291097m.jpg[/img]
While this card is face-up on the field both players must pay 500 Life Points to activate a Spell, Trap, or Monster Effect that a does not target a monster.

[img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/3203/291097h.jpg[/img]
While this card is face-up on the field both players must pay 500 Life Points to activate a Spell, Trap, or Monster Effect that targets a monster.


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[spoiler=Traps(3)]
[img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/6299/291097r.jpg[/img]
When a monster you controls is selected as an attack target the monster is switched to defense position the targeted monster gains 2000 Def until the End Phase. At the end of your opponent's turn the selected monster is switched to Attack Position. If you control no Spellcaster-Type monster(s) destroy this card.

[img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/8269/291097g.jpg[/img]
You can only activate this card if you control at least 1 level 5 or higher Spellcaster type monster. Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field to destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and any Spell or Trap Cards that are in the same Column as the selected monster.

[img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/3279/291097q.jpg[/img]
Select 1 non-Dark Attribute Spellcaster-Type monster you control. The selected monster's Attribute becomes Dark. If the selected monster is removed from the field send this card to the graveyard. While this card remains face up on the field you can activate 1 of the following effects during your opponents Battle Phase.

*Remove from play 1 Card in your hand to remove from play 1 Attacking monster.

*Negate the Attack of 1 non-Dark Attribute monster





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[spoiler=Synchro Monsters(1)]
[img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/2070/291097b.jpg[/img]
"1 Spellcaster Turner monster" + 1 or more non Turner Spellcaster monsters

This monster is Also treated as a Spellcaster while on the field and in your Extra Deck. Any Spell card your opponent that involves selecting card(s) on the field, you instead are able to select the targeted cards.
When this card declares an attack you can discard 2 cards from your hand to immediately destroy the selected attack target before damage calculation.


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NerdyAndyB Newbie

NerdyAndyB

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TBH, its not really possible to comment on this set because it really needs more monsters.
On the whole, not bad, but like I said, needs more monsters. They dont really work well together.
A few OCG errors, but the effects aren't OP/UP.
7/10

BTW, where does everyone get these decent images from?
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Mazerrick Newbie

Mazerrick

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OCG:
This is not affected by your opponent's Spell Cards. When this card is Normal Summoned add 1 "Magic School 101" card from your Deck to your hand.

Focus OCG:
While this card is face-up on the field both players must pay 500 Life Points to activate a Spell, Trap, or Monster Effect that a does not target a monster.

Wild Spell OCG:
While this card is face-up on the field both players must pay 500 Life Points to activate a Spell, Trap, or Monster Effect that a does target a monster.

Ran out of time, I'll do the rest tomorrow (if I can)
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Anbu-of-Sand Newbie

Anbu-of-Sand

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Well, you wanted pointers, so here they are. Not the best pointers, but hope they help :)

[color=blue][b]OCG[/b][/color]
Always word your effects properly. Don't forget that some things such as normal summon, special summon, flip summon, attack position, defense position, spell card, trap card, life points, and whatnot are always capitalized. Also do not forget that in some cases, attack and defense may be ATK and DEF, or the other way around, depending on the effect. Same thing when you write down a number such as one, it should be in the actual number form, so one would be 1, two would be 2, etc. Also, don't forget outside of OCG, there is just typing the word correctly. Don't forget to use proper spelling as well. The cards you have posted here have a few OCG errors here and there, so I'd look into fixing / finding them.

[color=blue][b]The Effects[/b][/color]
All the cards seem to have a Lockdown strategy to them, limiting your opponent's moves, and also your own. Now don't forget that even though these concepts may have been done before, find a way to make them more....exciting, original, unique, etc. Also, OCG ties with the effect of a card as well. Not wording an effect right could lead to a hidden loop in the card's effect, thus making the card overpowered by itself, or when paired up with other cards. This also ties in with balance. So consider on thinking if the effect is balanced. But even though the effect may be balanced, something such as the Level / the ATK and DEF can change that completely, so take note of those things as well.
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Anbu-of-Sand

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[color=blue][b]Magic School Archetype Review[/b][/color]
The Archetype has a decent lockdown strategy mostly revolving around Spells, Traps, and monster card effects, making either player pay Life Points just to activate a certain Spell, Trap, or monster card effect, depending on the effect of said card. Now even though this concept has been done a few times in the past of YGO, I can say this Archetype has somewhat of a more unique way of doing so. The OCG for the cards need improvement. Don't forget that some basic this such as Spell, Trap, Life Points, Spellcaster, Type, and whatnot have to be capitalized, along with grammar on it's own has to be spot-on. Some of the card's here are quite average / okay / balanced, then on the other hand, some cards are quite overpowering, I can only assume they are, because I am not entirely sure on the effect by the OCG in some spots. So for now, the Archetype seems decent and all, just tweak some effects to balance them out and clean up the OCG a bit. Overall, this gets a [b]5.3/10[/b]
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<}Alpha Frogodile{>

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Spellcaster Type = Spellcaster-Type
Trap card = Trap Card
monster = Monster

as for the first card:

While [B]tis[/B] card remain face up on the [B]filed[/B] every time the effect of a Continuous Spell or [B]T rap[/B] card you control resolves gain 300 Life Points.

For those of you who don't know:

tis is a new conjunction meaning "to his", also the male version of "ter".

the filed is a place on your field where you can get a manicure.

T rap is slang translated as one of T-Pain's attempts at rapping.
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[attachment=30209:Giratina, Master of the Torn world.bmp][quote name='forteller' timestamp='1285990224' post='4672382']
[spoiler=Monster(5)][img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/2449/291097m.jpg[/img]
While tis card remain face up on the filed every time the effect of a Continuous Spell or T rap card you control resolves gain 300 Life Points.

[img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/6766/291097l.jpg[/img]
This is not affected by your opponent's Spell Cards. When this card is Normal Summoned add 1 "Magic School 101" card from your Deck to your hand.

[img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/2710/291097t.jpg[/img]
While this card is Face up on the field Spell or Trap cards with " Magic School " in their name cannot be destroyed by your opponents card effects.

[img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/8929/291097i.jpg[/img]
You can tribute 1 Spellcaster type monster on your side of the field and discard 1 Spell card from your hand to special summon this monster.This monster cannot declare an attack on the turn you activate this effect,Negate the activation of 1 Spell card your opponent activates.

[img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/9194/291097w.jpg[/img]
You can tribute 1 spellcaster type monster on your side of the field and discard one Trap card from your hand to special summon this monster.This monster cannot declare an attack on the turn you activate this effect,Negate the activation of 1 Trap card your opponent activates.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Spells(6)]
[img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/3279/291097q.jpg[/img]
While this card is face-up on the field both players must pay 500 Life Points to activate a Spell, Trap, or Monster Effect that a does not target a monster.

[img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/8929/291097i.jpg[/img]
While this card is face-up on the field both players must pay 500 Life Points to activate a Spell, Trap, or Monster Effect that a targets a monster.

[img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/8929/291097i.jpg[/img]
While this card remain face up on the field any damage done to your Life points by a Spell or Trap Card that you control is reduced to 0. If you do not not control at least 1 Spellcaster type monster send this card to the graveyard.

[img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/4888/291097.jpg[/img]
You can only activate this card when their are 3 or more Spellcaster Type monsters on your side of the field.Flip all face down monsters face up(flip effects are not activated at this time)Remove all non-spellcaster monsters on the field from play, then remove from play one Spellcaster type monster on your side of the field.

[img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/1358/291097yz.jpg[/img]
You must control a level 5 or higher Spellcaster Type monster to Activate this card. Until your opponent's 2nd End Phase after this card is activated your opponents monster's cannot declare an attack the turn they were summoned.

[img]http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/9467/291097u.jpg[/img]
You can only activate this card if you control at least 1 level 5 or higher Spellcaster type monster. When you activate this card choose 1 of the following effects.

* Switch all monsters on your opponent control to defense position.
* Send 1 card you opponent controls back to the owner's deck then its owner draws 1 card.

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[spoiler=Traps(2)]
[img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/2955/291097p.jpg[/img]
Select 1 monster you control.The selected monster is switched to defense position when attacked the selected monster gains 2000 Def until the End Phase. At the end of your opponent's turn the selected monster is switched to Attack Position.

[img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/9358/291097n.jpg[/img]
You can only activate this card if you control at least 1 level 5 or higher Spellcaster type monster. Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field to destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and any Spell or Trap Card that is in the same Column as the selected monster.

[img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/3203/291097h.jpg[/img]
Select 1 non-dark Attribute Spellcaster Type monster you control. The selected monster's Attribute becomes Dark. If the selected monster is removed from the field send this card to the graveyard. While this card remains face up on the field you can activate 1 of the following effects during your opponents Battle Phase.

*Remove from play 1 Card in your hand to remove from play 1 Attacking monster.

*Negate The Attack of 1 non-Dark Attribute monster

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[spoiler=Synchro Monsters(1)]
[img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/6058/291097z.jpg[/img]
"1 Spellcaster Turner monster" + 1 or more non Turner Spellcaster monsters

This monster is Also treated as a Spellcaster while on the field and in your extra deck. Any Spell card your opponents that involves then selecting card(s) on the field, you instead are able to select the targeted cards.
When this card declares an attack you can discard 2 cards from your hand to immediately destroy the selected attack target before damage calculation.


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Anbu-of-Sand Newbie

Anbu-of-Sand

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Throughout the cards, the revised OCG is much better then before, but still has some mistakes here and there, outside of OCG, there is also still some punctuation and spelling mistakes in a few of the cards as well. The 2 newest monsters seem okay, but that Trish monster seems a tad too overpowering. Don't forget to take note on balance, seeing it's one of the key things you have to remember when making a (good) card. New rating is a [b]5.6/10[/b]. Your slowly getting there :D
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Anbu-of-Sand

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[quote name='forteller' timestamp='1290646988' post='4808243']
I willl scan again for more errors but with trish's effect does anyone think adding a summoning restriction would be enough to balance it out?
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Actually, all I think it needs is that it's last effect needs a Level downgrade. Being able to Special Summon a Level [b]7[/b] and lower seems quite well, high with the Level range there. I'd say reducing it to the average Level 4 would be best for the card. And perhaps even stating the first effect only effects all [b]other[/b] Spellcaster-Type monsters, otherwise this becomes a fearsome 3100 beatstick. And if you do state it only effects other Spellcaster-Types, how but making the 300 ATK boost to 400? But if that makes it too overpowered, maybe make it also effect only Level 4 or lower Spellcaster-Type monsters.
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