THe Dragon Family

[Kuroda Kaito]

[center][b][i]There is a Dragon Family at the Northern West of Asia, in a mountain. A very large Dragon Family that divide into 6 Dragon-clans and each clan show each individual strength like Fire, Water, Dark, Light, Earth and Wind. Each clan has a Head Dragon, a Guardian (who always protect the Head), 3 Warriors and the rest are member. There are those who process a power to be The Controller of the Head Dragon of each clan. There is a Dark Side Dragon Family who want to be a Legendary Dragon to take control the 6 Dragon-clan so the Dragon Family have to combineeach strength to destroy the Dark Side Dragon Family. Let's see what will happen, okay?! And please give comment, thank you ^^

[img]http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/865/bannersnp.png[/img]

[font="Franklin Gothic Medium"]And now here are the clans: [/font]

[spoiler=[font="Palatino Linotype"]The Drageleon Clan[/font]]
[spoiler=Zaku, the Head Dragon of the Drageleon]
[img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/8177/zakutheheaddragonofthed.jpg[/img]

Lore:
This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card can only be Special Summon by tributing 4 Dragon Monsters from your field to the Graveyard. This card's ATK will be increase by 500 for each "Drageleon Monster" on your field. When this card destroy your opponent's Monster, that Monster will be come an Equip Card and equip to this card, this card's ATK and DEF will be increase equal to the equipped Monster's ATK and DEF. This card cannot be destroy by battle.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Kotaro,the Guardian of the Drageleon]
[img]http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/4103/kotarotheguardianofthed.jpg[/img]

Lore:
This card cannot be Special Summon, this card only be Tribute Summon by tributing 2 "Drageleon" monsters on your field to the Graveyard. When this card destroy your opponent's monster, you can select 2 "Drageleon" monsters in your Graveyard and take it back to the top of your deck then suffle your deck. When "Zaku, the Head Dragon of the Drageleon" is become a target attack of your opponent's monster, you can discard all cards in your hand to negate that attack immediately.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Hattori the #1 Warrior of the Drageleon]
[img]http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/6926/hattorithe1warriorofthe.jpg[/img]

Lore:
This card effect can only be activate when there is 1 "Drageleon" Monster on your field. While this card is remaining on the field, all "Drageleon" Monsters' ATK and DEF will be increase by 500 points.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Kaiser the #2 Warrior of the Drageleon]
[img]http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/7734/kaiserthe2warriorofthed.jpg[/img]

Lore:
When this card is Special Summon from the Graveyard, return this card back to the bottom of your Deck and select 1 Level 5 or lower "Drageleon" Monster from your Deck or hand to your field.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Hikari, the chosen kid of Drageleon]
[img]http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/6473/hikarithechosenkidofdra.jpg[/img]

Lore:
When this card is Summoned, "Zaku"'s ATK and DEF will be increase by 500 points. When "Zaku" destroy your opponent's Monster, this card's ATK and DEF will be increase by 400 points and your opponent's LP will be decrease by 500 points. When this card destroy your opponent's Monster, you can discard 3 cards from the top of your deck and send them to the Graveyard to increase your LP by 1000 points.[/spoiler][/spoiler][/i][/b][/center]

That's all, hope you like it

[Spoon]

You still have to improve your grammar. Not OCG (I mean, that too, but I don't care for that), but actual grammar.

First of: Zaku looks pretty awesome, maybe there's a little too much going on on the card, but it still looks pretty fancy. The effect... well, it looks like a beatstick on steroids. Seriously, he already [i]has[/i] a huge amount of ATK, and all you do in this effect is boosting it further and further, I guess he'll explode of power sometimes soon Also he can't be destroyed by battle... yeah... because you can destroy a monster with 4000+++ ATK so easily in battle, can you? As the head of a family, it shouldn't only [i]be[/i] supported by the family members, it should also provide support [i]itself[/i]. That's what I'm missing here.
Also "Drageleon" sounds meh

Kotaro doesn't really do what he's supposed to do, does he? I can't see any protective effect on him. The effect in itself is alright, but it doesn't do justice to a "Guardian", as you described him yourself in the introduction.

Also, and most importantly (you didn't answer this question back in your old thread, that's why I'm putting it in [b]bold[/b] now, so it can't be avoided anymore ): [b]What are this cards based on? This is still the Pop Culture Section... if they are completely original, they should go in the Realistic or AoC Section.[/b] Just saying

Other than that, the idea is nice and could be continued, if you work on your grammar (please, sometimes it really hurts... and yes, I'm a Grammar Nazi)

So long,

Spoon

[X-Man321]

1000000000000000000000/10

[Kuroda Kaito]

well, these cards just base on Dragons and some chosen person (as i said at the 1# post)

BTW, thanks for comment, i'll fix it right away

[Spoon]

[quote]- Pop Culture is meant for any cards related to, but not limited to: movies, television programming, video gaming, music, etc.
Any other cards that do not fall under this category belong in their respective subforums.[/quote]

Quoted from the rules of the Pop Culture Section. "Based on dragons you totally made up and don't belong to any medium other than your imagination" doesn't count and still belongs in RC or AoC

Eh... 'nuff minimodding, please continue and ignore me

[Kuroda Kaito]

neh, it's okay ^^, thanks for supporting
and BTW, do you want to have a 1on1 contest with me???

[Kuroda Kaito]

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