Stardust Soldier Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 Okey Dokey, Well I have just updated my two cards both visually and effects-wize, Please, if you have any issues, give me constructive critisism. Enjoy! This is my version of Ra. Same effect and everything, but I thought i'd give it a little "Stardust" action lol. [img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/5196/289589n.jpg[/img] This is the updated version of my old card (it received below mediocre reviews so i re-did it). [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/216/289589.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 These are actually pretty good for a new member. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stardust Soldier Posted October 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 Thanks Drgon God, I appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 There is a few small errors like how you word the effect but other than that its good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stardust Soldier Posted October 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 Thank you for the constructive critisism, Can you please tell me the errors so i can fix them? its 4:30am in australia right now so im a little disorientated lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
O.B. Palomino Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 Great cards, both of them. The artwork for The Winged Dragon Of Ra is impressive, and the picture used for the Spell Cards is cool, too. And yes, you need to correct some of the OCG in the cards, but the effects are well balanced. Good job, man, keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stardust Soldier Posted October 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 Thank you, palomino. can anyone give me some odeas, for new god-based cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lil' Foxy Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 good effects, pics, and balanced. good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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