kevin7653 Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 this is my 1st synchro monster I made and the 4th I made today [img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/6280/218546.jpg[/img]art credit to jazinskays Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjaFe Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 Well the OCG is a little bit messed up It should go something like this: 2 Tuner + 3 or more non-Tuner monsters You can tribute a Machine-Type or Dragon-Type monster to destroy 1 monster on your opponent side of the field. I think that this effect and power is a little bit OP. Would balance it out a little bit. But then again, its ur card, u should do with it what u think it fits properly Rating: 4/10 <-- cuz ur new Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted October 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 [quote name='DjaFe' timestamp='1286144663' post='4677312'] Well the OCG is a little bit messed up It should go something like this: 2 Tuner + 3 or more non-Tuner monsters You can tribute a Machine-Type or Dragon-Type monster to destroy 1 monster on your opponent side of the field. I think that this effect and power is a little bit OP. Would balance it out a little bit. But then again, its ur card, u should do with it what u think it fits properly Rating: 4/10 <-- cuz ur new [/quote] your the new member I have been on almost a year I looked at real synchro monsters making this card so is has correct ocg mind you that ocg you have is messed up and it's not overpowered cause it has to have 5 cards sacrificed to summon it and they have to equal 11 levels so they have to be low on about a 2 level average 2 of which have to be tuners so the cards to summon are hard to get all at one time ++neg rep for you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 It requires 5 monsters to Summon. It would never see play time, so it's not OP'd. Effect is lacking. EDIT: don't neg him for helping you. That's just idiotic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted October 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 [quote name='¡Smesh!' timestamp='1286145357' post='4677344'] It requires 5 monsters to Summon. It would never see play time, so it's not OP'd. Effect is lacking. EDIT: don't neg him for helping you. That's just idiotic. [/quote] sorry but he was acting like he was level 6 or something and was on here for like 3 years and is card making champion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjaFe Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 [quote name='kevin7653' timestamp='1286145273' post='4677337'] your the new member I have been on almost a year I looked at real synchro monsters making this card so is has correct ocg mind you that ocg you have is messed up and it's not overpowered cause it has to have 5 cards sacrificed to summon it and they have to equal 11 levels so they have to be low on about a 2 level average 2 of which have to be tuners so the cards to summon are hard to get all at one time ++neg rep for you [/quote] Well actually I've laughed at this. Look if you want to give me NEG rep for trying to help you be my guest, I really don't mind. Please check ur grammar on the card before claiming that its correct. Few mistakes u've made: tuners = tuner non tuner = non-tuner machine = Machine-Type dragon type = Dragon-Type There was a selection about proper card grammar on the forum a while ago, and I believe its still there. Look for it, might help u out a bit Didn't want to insult you with this part ---> "cuz ur new" or with the next sentence im about to make. I've seen better cards from new members so I've tought u might be new as well... My rating still stands and if you want to give me neg rep, well thats your call Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 [quote name='kevin7653' timestamp='1286145845' post='4677377'] sorry but he was acting like he was level 6 or something and was on here for like 3 years and is card making champion [/quote] level and time spent on YCM do not affect card making. Look at Jay for instance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjaFe Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 [quote name='kevin7653' timestamp='1286145845' post='4677377'] sorry but he was acting like he was level 6 or something and was on here for like 3 years and is card making champion [/quote] New account FTW _/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted October 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 [quote name='DjaFe' timestamp='1286145996' post='4677388'] Well actually I've laughed at this. Look if you want to give me NEG rep for trying to help you be my guest, I really don't mind. Please check ur grammar on the card before claiming that its correct. Few mistakes u've made: tuners = tuner non tuner = non-tuner machine = Machine-Type dragon type = Dragon-Type There was a selection about proper card grammar on the forum a while ago, and I believe its still there. Look for it, might help u out a bit Didn't want to insult you with this part ---> "cuz ur new" or with the next sentence im about to make. I've seen better cards from new members so I've tought u might be new as well... My rating still stands and if you want to give me neg rep, well thats your call [/quote]sorry dude + pos rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 I agree w/ iSmesh. How many stars you have doesn't matter and you shouldn't neg someone just cause they don't like your card. Anyways, on to the card: -You should consider changing the name's color cause I can't read it -Nice picture -Too much stars.... -Lots of OCG errors (DjaFe got the summoning condition right) -Don't make a gap between summoning conditions and the effect -This is gonna be hard to summon... -The effect need a little more detail and it needs to be stronger (EX: Once per turn, you can remove 1 Machine-Type Monster from play to......) -For a Lv 11 Synchro, the effect is weak Overall, it's okay for a 1st Synchro. [b]I'll give you a 5.9/10. [/b]You can improve, I know you can. Keep on making cards -Athena- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjaFe Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 [quote name='kevin7653' timestamp='1286146569' post='4677417'] sorry dude + pos rep [/quote] Is cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted October 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 thanks and sorry guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheMan Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 It doesn't matter what Level you are on this forum. You can be Level 1 with 1 post Yu Gi Oh OCG Pro, and everybody here can correct everybody. and you can get levels here just by making some "blank" comments...so.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patchy06 Posted October 9, 2010 Report Share Posted October 9, 2010 [quote name='¡Smesh!' timestamp='1286146076' post='4677393'] level and time spent on YCM do not affect card making. Look at Jay for instance. [/quote] how do you find a url? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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