cardkeeper Posted October 6, 2010 Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 Hey guys, I havn't been active in years (litterally! ) so I thought I'd come back with a big ol' set! It's still in production. But here's a spoiler! It's card No. 1! Enjoy and Comment! [img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/2517/32179.jpg[/img] [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/2517/32179.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackFeatherCrow Posted October 6, 2010 Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 OP'd. You didn't post lore, but its readable. OCG is okay, except the "you may take any one card from your Graveyard and put it in your hand" Just write: you can add 1 card from your Graveyard to your hand, its shorter and of OCG. Also, you can leave out Life Points in "to your Opponent's Life Points". Idea is good, image and card name are good related. But Balance: Adding any card you want from your Grave to your hand, is... broken. Even if the ATK and DEF are quite low, the effect is too good. also the special summon condition does not balance it well. Make it, if it is Flip summoned. that would be better, or leave the effect and add a cost (by discarding 1 card, etc.) and leave out the damage dealing also. Then it should be better. It is just a card that any player would like to have.^^ I'll give 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream Cabbage Posted October 6, 2010 Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 afew OCG errors and the pic is not great. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buttercup Posted October 6, 2010 Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 It's a floater that can be easily searched, burns, brokenly toolboxes from the Grave and isn't theme stamped. BOOOOOOOOOOOOO. 3/10 BROKENZ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cardkeeper Posted October 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 Thanks for the feedback. Its been so long since I've been here my OCG is somewhat off. And I will make it less broken, I really just realized how OPd it really is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted October 6, 2010 Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 Pic could be better (text) Name's a little weird. OP'd. Lower ATK and DEF (preferably 0 and 0) and set limitations to what card you can get, or keep ATK and DEF the way they are and severely limit what card you get. I might make it a DARK Level 4 or lower of something like that. OCG looks solid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cardkeeper Posted October 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 Added Card No. 2 for your viewing pleasure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buttercup Posted October 6, 2010 Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 Make it into Scrap Dragon's effect, but for S/T instead, so it makes more sense. 6/10, I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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