Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted October 6, 2010 Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 Made these two for 1on1 contests that are currently active, but would like some more analysis from the user's of this section. Worked quite hard on these espcially with finding names based on something that fits the cards, but feel I've overpowered both in an effort to overcome strong opposition. [spoiler=Aki Seishin - Requirements to make a Spirit that uses Spell Counters] [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/1785/258150s.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up. Each time a Spell Card is activated, put 1 Spell Counter on this card. You can remove 1 Spell Counter from this card to change the battle position of 1 monster on the field. If you select a face-down monster it is flipped face-up, and if it has a flip effect is not activated. If there is a Spell Counter on this card when it is returned to your hand by it's own effect, draw 1 card per Spell Counter on this card.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Krnobos - Requirements to make a DARK monster that affects LIGHT monsters] [img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/8130/258150j.jpg[/img] Lore:This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Tribute Summoned, the Tribute must be a LIGHT monster. As long as this card is face-up on the field, all LIGHT monsters become DARK, their ATK and DEF is halved, and their effects are negated. This cards ATK and DEF becomes equal to half the combined ATK and DEF of all LIGHT monsters on the field effected by this card. If this cards ATK or DEF exceeds 3000, destroy this card.[/spoiler] Useful feedback appreciated, as would votes in the 1on1s. One line responses and numbers are not appreciated as they don't help me improve the cards, they are far from my best and that's why I put them up here. Cheers. Matt Bahamut Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buttercup Posted October 6, 2010 Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 The first one is clearly broken. Second one is UP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted October 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 [quote name='Ser Warjacksworth' timestamp='1286391272' post='4683850'] The first one is clearly broken. Second one is UP. [/quote] That's dead helpful. Change 'Any' feedback to 'Useful' Feedback please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buttercup Posted October 6, 2010 Report Share Posted October 6, 2010 THE FIRST ONE HELPS FTKS AND LOLSTUPIDPLUSESBECAUSEIDREWTHISCARD. THE SECOND ONE IS A SPIRIT THAT -1S WHICH ISN'T DARK DUST SPIRIT THERE IM HELPFUL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted October 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2010 Ka-bump. C'mon people need a hand with these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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