Sephiroth

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[Venom]

Card concept is good, but lemme point some mistakes you have there:

1. If it has an effect, it cannot be a Vanilla (a normal monster). Make it an Effect monster.
2. If this card's effect would stay untouched, OCG would be like this: "You can pay 300 Life Points to raise this card's ATK by 300."
3. If you are making a fake-type (which I totally support), make some Support Cards (for eg: spells, traps. etc).

[type87randomXD]

[quote name='Venom' timestamp='1286474012' post='4685918']
Card concept is good, but lemme point some mistakes you have there:

1. If it has an effect, it cannot be a Vanilla (a normal monster). Make it an Effect monster.
2. If this card's effect would stay untouched, OCG would be like this: "You can pay 300 Life Points to raise this card's ATK by 300."
3. If you are making a fake-type (which I totally support), make some Support Cards (for eg: spells, traps. etc).
[/quote] it has not a effect,and it is a normal monster(wait you mean that is a effect?!) i´m sorry,i do it better next time

[Haku Yowane]

Fake-Types are ok, but this one is bad. Maybe "Angel" for the Type? I whink Winged-Beast.

Should be an effect monster.

It's over powered, unless you make the effect once per turn. As it is, you can do it as many times as you want. The effect should be, "You can pay 300 Life Points to increase the ATK of this card by 300."

But to make it balanced, it would be, "Once per turn, you can pay 300 Life Points to increase the ATK of this card by 300 until the End Phase of this turn."

[MortalKombatSmoke]

Effect monsters have certain things that allow you to do extra stuff like Sacrificing ____ life points to do _____. Normal monsters only have stuff like: "Fallen from heaven, Sephiroth has come"