trevdagamer Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 ok here are my first three cards of a new set. i edited them up a bit.PS: if there is bad ocg, please tell me what it should say instead of just saying "Bad ocg". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trevdagamer Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 ok here are my first three cards of a new set. i edited them up a bit.PS: if there is bad ocg, please tell me what it should say instead of just saying "Bad ocg". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 me like... 8/10, only thing that could make it better is having a Ancient Gear monster =P... mecha drone is what sets it off, and mecha sheperd isnt entirely useful yet... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 me like... 8/10, only thing that could make it better is having a Ancient Gear monster =P... mecha drone is what sets it off, and mecha sheperd isnt entirely useful yet... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trevdagamer Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 well mecha sepher will be usefull once i finish the set, its gonna have a bit low leveled and defense monsters, which many new sets today do not have. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trevdagamer Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 well mecha sepher will be usefull once i finish the set, its gonna have a bit low leveled and defense monsters, which many new sets today do not have. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 well mecha sepher will be usefull once i finish the set' date=' its gonna have a bit low leveled and defense monsters, which many new sets today do not have.[/quote']Â yeah im trying that with my set but its near impossible due to the theme.... and im trying not include beasts unless it absolutely warrants it........> but all crying aside, i have a feeling this will turn into one of the better sets ill see, and thats not just because i use machines in my real life deck =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 well mecha sepher will be usefull once i finish the set' date=' its gonna have a bit low leveled and defense monsters, which many new sets today do not have.[/quote']Â yeah im trying that with my set but its near impossible due to the theme.... and im trying not include beasts unless it absolutely warrants it........> but all crying aside, i have a feeling this will turn into one of the better sets ill see, and thats not just because i use machines in my real life deck =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Many Grammar and OCG errors + some pictures dont look good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Many Grammar and OCG errors + some pictures dont look good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Many Grammar and OCG errors + some pictures dont look good. i agree. okay start, though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trevdagamer Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 well can you at least tell me what the ocg errors should be? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 well, actually, i change my mind. i only found 1 mistake. normal summoned should always be Normal Summoned.  sry bout that.... rating: 11.11/13.69 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 well' date=' actually, i change my mind. i only found 1 mistake. normal summoned should always be Normal Summoned.  sry bout that.... rating: 11.11/13.69[/quote'] there are some more mainly captillizing dj will point it out plus there are certian ways of writing attack deppending on the meaningATK= increase the ATK of this cardattack+ when this card declares an attack.do you see what i mean it is also the same with it's deffence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 well' date=' actually, i change my mind. i only found 1 mistake. normal summoned should always be Normal Summoned.  sry bout that.... rating: 11.11/13.69[/quote'] there are some more mainly captillizing dj will point it out plus there are certian ways of writing attack deppending on the meaningATK= increase the ATK of this cardattack+ when this card declares an attack.do you see what i mean it is also the same with it's deffence that's true, i missed that the first (and second) time i looked through the cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Basherbelding Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 The first and third card is over powered the first card has a bad images (no offence) The OCG is kinda bad but overall 6/10 not a bad start :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trevdagamer Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 well, i dont see how the first is over powered seeing as how things like masked dragon have the same exact effect, and for the third no matter what it destroys, even a 500 ATK monster, your opponent doesnt lose life points, so it seems preety fair to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 the last card reminds me of another card.... cant seem to put my finger on it, but keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trevdagamer Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 i made the last card based off of megarock dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 For the dog one, did you mean "ShepHerd" and not Sheperd? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trevdagamer Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 ya i did ill change that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Ok, yay I helped someone ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trevdagamer Posted January 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2008 edited them and added a poll Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted January 22, 2008 Report Share Posted January 22, 2008 They're alright, I love the pic on Mecha Metal Dragon. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trevdagamer Posted January 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 new card added. bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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