Blackwing Godleus!

[TeamReginaRage]

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This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is targeted by the effect of a Spell or Trap card, Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent for each different spot this card travels to in the current duel due to the Spell / Trap cards effect. This includes changing battle positions. If a cards effect is activated to chain the first Spell / Trap, that targets this card, inflict 2000 damage to your opponent.

[King.Light]

Before I rate anything, could you Copy;Paste the effect below the card so I don't need to scroll up and down to see the effect? Thanks.

[TeamReginaRage]

Fixed!

[King.Light]

Thank you. Now I can rate your card. The OCG is actually off in some places, but overall good so I'll help you out.:

[i][b]Your OCG:
This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is targeted by the effect of a Spell or Trap card, Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent for each different spot this card travels to in the current duel due to the Spell / Trap cards effect. This includes changing battle positions. If a cards effect is activated to chain the first Spell / Trap, that targets this card, inflict 2000 damage to your opponent.


My OCG:
This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. When this card is selected is targeted by a Spell/Trap card effect, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent's Life Points each time this card moves from your Hand, Deck, Field, or Graveyard using the Spell/Trap card effect.[/b][/i]


In my OCG I left out unneeded setences and effects. Some because they are a little too OP like the last effect.

Time for card structure time. The card structure is very well managed, but it looks more like a WIND attribute instead of DARK. Overall, good card.

I say, 8.9/10.

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

[quote name='King.Light' timestamp='1286517513' post='4687618'][i][b]
My OCG:
This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. When this card is selected is targeted by a Spell/Trap card effect, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent's Life Points each time this card moves from your Hand, Deck, Field, or Graveyard using the Spell/Trap card effect.[/b][/i]
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not entirely correct, but you are improving. Anyway, yeah this effect is in need of a major overhaul, it took me forever to figure out what it was trying to say. Anyway, here's my interpretation:

This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. When this card is removed from the field by a card effect, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.

I know, it is way shorter now because of all the unnecessary words/phrases that were taken out. Anyway, as it stands this card is OP'd slightly because the stats are high and it can't be destroyed easily. It isn't anything major, but I would recommend dropping the ATK to 1200. That way it still has high DEF but weaker ATK.