my first few goes at making cards

[Corza]

rate and please any advice on making it realistic would be much appreciated
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i know that most people do high level dragons but what can i say i like dragons.

[Prince Dusk]

Alright then. Some advice...

1. Don't use attachments. Just click on the card and copy and paste the link.
2. Try to find better pics. Either from other websites or image archives here. Try not to use Google.
3. You're gonna need to learn some OCG (Official Card Grammer). I'm no expert, but try asking others.
4. These card are way to OP (overpowered). Try toning down their effects, or adding some drawbacks to balance them out.

Anyway, you're new, so I won't judge you on your very first cards. Try using this advice and other people's advice to make your cards better.

[Corza]

[quote name='Prince Dusk' timestamp='1286638546' post='4690743']
Alright then. Some advice...

1. Don't use attachments. Just click on the card and copy and paste the link.
2. Try to find better pics. Either from other websites or image archives here. Try not to use Google.
3. You're gonna need to learn some OCG (Official Card Grammer). I'm no expert, but try asking others.
4. These card are way to OP (overpowered). Try toning down their effects, or adding some drawbacks to balance them out.

Anyway, you're new, so I won't judge you on your very first cards. Try using this advice and other people's advice to make your cards better.
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i'm not very good with computers.
yes i know the pictures are not that original, i want to get a program to do my own ones, anyway what do you reckon about my changes to the cards.
and cheers for the advice