Bluephoenix Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Ok,these are my first cards,like I said.I might have made some OCG or spelling mistakes and some pictures might have been overused,so please tell me where I can improve.P.S. I know some of them don't have backgrounds,I don't have photoshop so I couldn't fix that A few spells and traps I made for them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 They are good for your first cards ^_^ Just mainly you have Grammar errors, but they can easily be corrected ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Some cards could use some backgrounds and a few grammer errors like DJ said but I'll give you a 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trevdagamer Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 pretty good for your first cards. the biggest ocg error though is oni killerit should be "when this monster battle a Fiend-Type monster, destroy that monster with this cadrs effect without applying damage calculation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Oh sweet,I wasn't expecting such good comments.Yeah,I type these up quick so when I post them I have a few errors.Thanks guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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