Kyubi Naruto Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Hello, I happen to be new. I thought I would show you my cards. Please go easy on me... Goblin TrooperGoblin SoldierGoblin SlaveGoblin MilitiaI will update them later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Well i cannot see the card lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyubi Naruto Posted January 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Can I have some comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace Daimon Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Needs work. Way too overpowered. Also needs spellchecking. Come back with better cards. Also, go to Help and watch the Yu-Gi-Oh Card Maker Tutorial Video on YouTube.Here to help!Ace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace Daimon Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Hey! Kyubi! Wanna join my buddy list? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 Quite a few grammar, capitalization, and punctuation errors. Also, please improve on your use of pictures, and the quality of them, in order to get higher ratings from other members. Good job for effort! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 Problems, problems, problems...Good effort though, as Glass said XD3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 Kyubi I'm new as well and ask people to "BE harsh" it lets you become a better card maker.They all have grammar errors and learn this : WHITE BACKGROUNDS DON'T LOOK GOODSoldier is broken as hell change it's effect to LOWER this cards ATK not make it higher.Sorry to be so harsh... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohrox Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 Umm.....I thought they were pretty good. The only thing that I would change would be the spelling........so GOOD JOB!!!:):):):):) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 Umm.....I thought they were pretty good. The only thing that I would change would be the spelling........so GOOD JOB!!!:):):):):) You don't find soldier broken or the background redundant? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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