~Hado~ Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 [font="Book Antiqua"][color="#FF8C00"][size="5"][b]I'm gonna test this effect out. Tell me if it sucks and whatnot.[/b][/size][/color][/font] [img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/3891/244936.jpg[/img] [b]Lore: [font="Century Gothic"]1 FIRE Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card destroys a face-up defense position monster your opponent controls, select 1 monster on the field. During each of your opponent's stanby phases, it loses 200 ATK and DEF.[/b] [b]Rather short effect, no? Constructive Critism is required, blah, blah, blah.[/b][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 OCG Fix: 1 FIRE Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card destroys a monster in face-up Defense Position that your opponent controls, select 1 monster on the field. During each of your opponent's Standby Phases, the selected monster loses 200 ATK and DEF. Besides that, very great card and super balanced. I would use and it looks more like a warrior type to me. 9' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Hado~ Posted October 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 Thnx, I like positive feed back. Though, I never change OCG. It seems too desperate to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 Np. And don't say desperate, i hate that word too btw. It doesn't mean your desperate, it's just you trying to become a better card maker and you learn from your mistakes. That's my slogan "Learn from your mistakes." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaime Duferier Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 i like the card, but it is difficult to summon AND it has [u]2600[/u] attack... but anyway, it gets a big fat 8/10 from moi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Hado~ Posted October 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 [quote name='Shiny Azelf Fan 333' timestamp='1286730408' post='4693873'] i like the card, but it is difficult to summon AND it has [u]2600[/u] attack... but anyway, it gets a big fat 8/10 from moi. [/quote] Good point, there aren't many Fire tuners. But what's wrong with it having 2600 ATK? Is it OP, UP, or what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaime Duferier Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 [quote name='Hadokenator 816' timestamp='1286730504' post='4693879'] Good point, there aren't many Fire tuners. But what's wrong with it having 2600 ATK? Is it OP, UP, or what? [/quote] Slightly OP'd. I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 There are no ocg errors as I can see. The ATK is too high though, change it to 1500 and DEF to 1500 and it will not be OPed. Other than that, a good card 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 Increase the level to 5 or 6 or just lower the ATK to 2000 and make the defense 800 (or something that seems 4 star realistic) but it could be hard to get out since the amount of fire tuners are limited. Balanced, and OCG is fine 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Banagher Links Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 well 1500 is kinda Up's though maybe 1800-2000 no higher and any lower would be Up'd aside from that i like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Hado~ Posted October 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 [b]..... HUH! I just realized I made it a 4 star. Ooops... @Cruelty: I owe you a pos rep. Could someone do that for me? I've reached mah quota.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 Well, then change the Level ^^ I think you should make it Level 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaime Duferier Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 or 8. the effect is quite powerful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Hado~ Posted October 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 [quote name='^_^AxManBoy^_^' timestamp='1286731548' post='4693944'] Well, then change the Level ^^ I think you should make it Level 6 [/quote] [b]Done. Sorry, but 8 is UP to me .[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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