F4LL3N H3R0 Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 [center]I'm tryin' to get back into creating cards and I've started to slip, so I'm going to post more cards to improve. Anyway, here you go. Tell me what you think.[/center] [center][img]http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/6637/297484.jpg[/img][/center] [spoiler= LORE] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Tranquil Rebirth". Once per turn, you can reveal and discard 1 Spell Card in you hand to place 1 Rebirth Counter on this card (max. 3). You can remove 3 Rebirth Counters to Specail Summon 1 level 4 or lower monster from the Graveyard. [/spoiler]BUMP... -_______- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetie Belle Posted October 12, 2010 Report Share Posted October 12, 2010 Well, first of all, don't advertise where it doesn't belong. Onto the card... Few OCG errors: [list] [*]The "reveal and" in the effect is unnecessary; by discarding it, it is automatically "revealed," since the Graveyard is public knowledge. [*]You misspelled "Special" in the last sentence. [*]In the last line, "Level" needs to be capitalised. [/list] Other than that, it's fine. I can't really comment on balance, unless it's obviously OP'ed or UP'ed. 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
F4LL3N H3R0 Posted October 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2010 Sorry for the advertisement but i needed comments. Thanks for the feedback though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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