My First Card (Mind Crushed)

[Elizabeth]

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Rulings: If The Player Would Gain An Odd Amount(ex: 5400), Then The Amount Would Be Rounded To The Nearest Multiple And Thus Reviewed.
So 5400= 5000 Which = 5cards.

I am open to all comments and such, thanks.

I created this card to open up doors for life gain / removal deck hybrids

[forteller]

im not pro on OGC rules but i know this card's is off the card itself has potential i suppose i personality dont care for cards that r this situational i dont many no of many strategies nowadays that involve constantly gaining of life points which is wat this card is good to counter... maybe a side deck card?

3/5 fix OGC -1 for being situational

[redfinale]

One OCG Fix Is That Every Word Of The Card Isn't Capitalized

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

OK, here are some OCG problems.

First, I'm assuming by "Life" you mean, "Life Points". Also, the first sentence says neither player can gain Life Points, but the second effect requires someone to gain Life Points to activate. Here's a better way to word your card.

As long as this card remains face up on the field, whenever a player gains Life Points, remove the top card of their deck for every 1000 points gained.

Also, it should round up, otherwise someone could gain 900 LP and avoid the effect.

Remember that only words like Life Points, card types or Attack Position should be capitalized if they aren't the first word in a sentence.

Like already said, this would be very situational, like only if you're facing off against a specific deck. Yeah, it can hurt Psychics, but try to make cards that work out against more than just 1 or 2 types of decks.

3/10, cuz I thought the idea was at least good enough to get something.