This..may be some of my best work!

[Makο]

[img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/1615/258841k.jpg[/img]
Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Summoned by playing Bllbo Baggins, Frodo Baggins, or Golem. If this card is chosen as an Attack Target, Roll a 6-Sided Die. The following effects correspond with the numbers on the die:
1- Special Summon Ring Wraith to the Field.
2- Choose 1 card your opponent controls. You can control that card until your End-Phase.
3- If there are more than 3 Cards on your opponents side of the Field, Summon 3 Warrior-Type monsters to your side (Excluding Special Summons).
4- Choose 1 card your opponent controls. That card loses all of its ATK and DEF until your next End Phase.
5- All Orc Archetypes gain 300 ATK.
6- If your Life Points are more than 500, negate this effect. Gain 2000 Life Points.


Watcha Think? Comments and Criticism accepted with open arms.

[Kroama]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned while you control "Bllbo Baggins", "Frodo Baggins", or "Golem". If this card gets attacked, Roll a 6-Sided Die then apply the appropriate effect:
1- Special Summon 1 "Ring Wraith" from your (location needed) to the field.
2- Select 1 card your opponent controls. Until the End Phase you take control of that card.
3- While your opponent controls 3 or more cards, you can Special Summon 3 Warrior-Type monsters from your (location needed) to the field.
4- Select 1 monster your opponent controls. That card's ATK and DEF are reduced to 0 until your next End Phase.
5- Increase the ATK of all Orc-Type monsters on the field by 300.
6- Negate the attack and gain 1000 life points.

Tried re-wording / balancing while keeping your effects. Can't really say what i think fairly without seeing the other 5-kinds of cards mentioned in his effect... -.o

[Makο]

I'll probably make them if I can find an appropriate pic for each one. And that OCG fix. It seemed very awkward, compared to what I have learned while I have been here. And you changed the last effect from what I wanted.

But thanks anyway!

[krazyxgamer]

his OCG is the correct one, yours is kinda weird in wording and stuff,
and idk how to rate it if i don't really know what the other cards are like

but for pics, creativity, and OCG i will rate it overall 8/10

[Makο]

Thanks for the rating. I appreciate it^^ I would change the OCG, but I'm to lazy

[Мερhilεs]

[color="#FF0000"][b][center]Mmmmm.. I quite like it. Though, none of the effects really jump out at me, it's pretty good. [/center][/b][/color]

[Makο]

I was just trying to make effect that fit the Rings nature.




Thx, BTW.