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Father Wolf Newbie

Father Wolf

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That picture is sweet. Whoever must have made it must be awesome XD. The card is decent but here is some fix OCG:
While this card is face-up on the field, increase the ATK and DEF of all DARK Dragon-Type monsters you control by 200. Once during your 2nd Main Phase after Summoning this card, you can Special Summon 1 "Darksworn Dragon" from your hand or Deck in face-up Attack Position.


I would have to see the rest of the set to give this a proper CC, but it seems fairly balanced almost underpowered.

[quote name='BlackWindDragon' timestamp='1286886103' post='4698761']
i think the ocg may be iffy, and it would be a better card if the image didnt have that border
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lol the image has the boarder because its the LS boarder.
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[quote name='HadesRuler' timestamp='1286921181' post='4699858']
Nice cards, with some bland effects. The pic from the first card is from a Saint Seiya character.
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Thanks and I didn't know that lol.

[quote name='Father Wolf' timestamp='1286923740' post='4700001']
yeah why would u D=
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Exactly my point.
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Ovedrive Newbie

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Will comment male warriors:

[b]Darksworn Elf Warrior[/b]
Bit Op'd. Needs some balance tho. Destroying and Special Summoning is to powerful imo.

[b]Darksworn Dungeon Master[/b]
Balanced tho. And that last effect: Is the damage inflicted to you or your opponent? Needs some ocg fixes also...

[b]Darksworn Dragon Knight[/b]
Pretty balanced and useful effect. Nice pic. Great card...

[b]Darksworn Forest Protector[/b]
Really Op'd if you duel against hm...e.g. Ancient Gears...or other EARTH decks. Needs some balance and ocg fix...

Total: Cards need some balance and ocg fixes. But I like the effort and idea for this set. 7/10. I'll give you rep.
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Blood Yuchi Newbie

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lol. Darksworn, just when I start to find Lightsworn monsters are kinda pain in the eyes as most players from my void deck started playing lightsworn decks. i should say that the effects were kinda bland,Op or not isn't much an issue to me though, as they don't seem to share some kind of similarity in effects. That's my point of view though as it makes archetype that special in the first place.

For the pics use I would suggest that you can put some time looking for renders, cause I feel that lightsworn was special in their way as they share the same background. You might want to try that, I don't mind making a pic for you though as you were really supportive for my previous set. =] You can just tell or pm me what kind of pic you would want your darksworn monsters to look like. Just take it as a token of appreciation. You might not know, I might continue making new pics for you if I got the time.

Oh ya for the rating, I would give a 6.5/10. To me it's because there's alot more room for improvement for effect wise, right now I don't see that it's anywhere new match to light sworns to me.
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Lexsuncion Newbie

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The only problem I have with these cards is that they down really seem to have a Lightsworn counter-effect, and overall, they don't seem to build off of each other as a set like Lightsworns do(With the sending from the deck). A few or the effects are OP'd, and kind of random.

I feel that they need something in common that ties them all together. Lightsworn like to Send cards from the deck, maybe these guys like to take them back, or something else? I don't know what to judge these as except stand-alone monsters with a common name until they all tie in together for a single purpose. However, thats only because of the Name and implied purpose (Darksworn Vs. Lightsworn). Aside from that, I like them. I'd put a few in my warrior deck I would! ;)

Lex gives [b]6/10[/b] for inconsistency between the cards themselves. A Couple of OP cards, but nothing too nasty and bad. Some grammar errors too, but Lex doesn't care about those, so those don't affect the score (Unless they make it impossible to read/understand, which they don't!)

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[quote name='Blood Angel' timestamp='1287371894' post='4714386']
How's the cards I've sent you, good? Cause I intended to remake them as I forgot to put the wisp(Substitude for the lightsworn star that appears behind the head of lightsworn monsters). hope to see your new cards soon.
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I made them and i hope you like them.

[quote name='Lexsuncion' timestamp='1287385176' post='4714654']
The only problem I have with these cards is that they down really seem to have a Lightsworn counter-effect, and overall, they don't seem to build off of each other as a set like Lightsworns do(With the sending from the deck). A few or the effects are OP'd, and kind of random.

I feel that they need something in common that ties them all together. Lightsworn like to Send cards from the deck, maybe these guys like to take them back, or something else? I don't know what to judge these as except stand-alone monsters with a common name until they all tie in together for a single purpose. However, thats only because of the Name and implied purpose (Darksworn Vs. Lightsworn). Aside from that, I like them. I'd put a few in my warrior deck I would! ;)

Lex gives [b]6/10[/b] for inconsistency between the cards themselves. A Couple of OP cards, but nothing too nasty and bad. Some grammar errors too, but Lex doesn't care about those, so those don't affect the score (Unless they make it impossible to read/understand, which they don't!)
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Then do you mind telling me what i should base them off? I'm thinking increasing ATK power for more damage cause that's what comes to mind when i think DARK monsters, full power!!

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Blood Yuchi Newbie

Blood Yuchi

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Okay you may want to try this instead:
- The naming convention for Lightsworn monster goes like this > e.g "Name"(Ryko), Lightswron "Class"(Hunter). You might want to follow this since I think that darksworn monsters are a counter part of lightsworn monsters. If I'm not wrong I actually name those pictures before giving it to you. (Should have left the names behind for you much more easier for you.)

- For effct wise you might want to choose to base on removing cards in your graveyard from play. Like "During each of your End Phases, remove 3 cards in your graveyard from play." and "You can destroy 1 card on the field. Remove 3 cards in your graveyard from play." You can even During each of your End Phases, remove 1 card in your opponent's graveyard from play."(Kinda OP you might want to tweak this effect for a change. xp) This way this cards can be playable with lightsworns too, why not OwO.

That's all for my suggestions
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