forteller Posted October 14, 2010 Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 [img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/8853/291097f.jpg[/img] On The End phase of the turn when this card was summoned You can pay 1000 Life points to special summon one "Darkship Master lv 5" Form your hand or deck, then send this monster to the graveyard. [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/6766/291097l.jpg[/img] When This Card is removed from the field you can pay 1000 Life points to special summon it to the field with its effect negated. Any time You pay Life points to activate a card effect you can pay 500 Life points to negate any card effect the would negate the cards effect and special summon one Darkship Master lv 8 From Your hand or deck, then Send this card to the graveyard. [img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/5254/291097o.jpg[/img] This card cannot be normal summoned or set, this card can only be special summoned expect by Darkship Master lv 5' effect, Unless the card was previously special summoned with Darkship Master lv 5 effect. As long As their is another monster on your side of the field the card cannot be destroyed by Spell card effects.This Monster cannot declare an attack. Once during Your Main phase special summon one level 4 or lower Psychic type monster from your deck in face up attack position [img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/3279/291097q.jpg[/img] Tribute one Psychic type monster on your side of the field, then select one monster one the field and all face up monsters on the field atk becomes the same as the selected monster's until the end phase. [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/1112/291097j.jpg[/img] A Monster equipped with this card has its effect negated. When the equipped monster is attacked or attacks another monster you can pay 500 life points to destroy the other monster after the damage step. When the equipped monster would be destroyed by battle send it to the owner's hand instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doomassasinx Posted October 14, 2010 Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 I see some grammar errors, like capitalization.... also i think the effect of LV8 is pretty........powerful. [Special Summon a Level 4 Psychic monster from your DECK.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forteller Posted October 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 Yeah i tried too balance it out by by making it so it couldn't attack it didnt work? Plz offer suggestion to change lv 8then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doomassasinx Posted October 14, 2010 Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 maybe lower its ATK and DEF...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forteller Posted October 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 i'll think on it i dont see how much it matter when it cant attack but ok im bout to add more cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doomassasinx Posted October 14, 2010 Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 [quote name='forteller' timestamp='1287022932' post='4703632'] i'll think on it i dont see how much it matter when it cant attack but ok im bout to add more cards [/quote] So that it can get destroyed more easily.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TeamReginaRage Posted October 14, 2010 Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 Love the ideas and pictures, but OCG is pretty bad 6.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forteller Posted October 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 im bad at OCG fixes would be helpful Anyway New cards added!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doomassasinx Posted October 14, 2010 Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 Look at this card and build with it with Psychics. [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/3104/158661l.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forteller Posted October 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 huh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinato Demise of Oblivion Posted October 14, 2010 Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 IIIII LLLLLLOOOOOVVVVEEEEEE TTTTHHHHEEEESSSSSEEEEEEE CCCCCAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRDDDDDDDSSSSSSSSS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forteller Posted October 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 thxs dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugimaster123 Posted October 15, 2010 Report Share Posted October 15, 2010 Realy cool i liked multi changing element dragon the best Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forteller Posted October 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2010 uhmmm ok? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forteller Posted October 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Welche the crab Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 Hey man! It seems you have had a bunch of new people rating your cards. I, on the other hand, don't like these that much. Just looking at the LVs I see some work needs to be done. In (I believe) all LV monsters there is a unifying effect that slowly gets stronger as the monster levels up. This series does not have that. I would suggest making it a Life Point increasing effect as that is how Psychics seem to work in my opinion. Something like "When this card is targeted by a Y, gain X amounts of life points" with X increasing as the LV goes up and Y becoming more general. The pictures on the other hand work well and the names and ATK and DEF are fine. I don't have much to say about the next card, but the last one is nice as the duelist using Psychics would have an excess of LPs. Overall good cards, keep up the good work. PS: OCG is my weakness, sorry that I can't help there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forteller Posted October 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 lol finally someone with a respectable opinion thanks for the overview very much appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Welche the crab Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 No problem. BTW, no rating because they are stupid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forteller Posted October 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 lol ok dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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