Sorrow. Posted October 14, 2010 Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 Thanks Soulciety you inspired me to create this. The first episode is about Peter coming home with a cat, that can talk. The Cat's name is Kyle and he seems to get along with Brian a lot and Brian totally ignores Stewie at first Stewie doesn't care but then he realizes Brian is his best friend but now he has to hang out with somebody else because Kyle has completely took his spot. I'm kind of rusty so bear with me if this isn't good. [spoiler= Ep.1 Kyle The Cat] [spoiler= Scene 1] The guys were at the Drunken Clam as always talking to each other about football since the season has just came out. " So how about them Patriots huh?" Peter said nudging his arm towards them " It's not gonna be the same without Moss," Joe said looking down at the floor " Moss? There was this girl it looked like she had moss all over her..Ohh" Quagmire said enthusiastically but then realizing it was a different type of Moss and quieted down. " I like the Browns, because there from Cleveland eheheh, " Cleveland said with a giggle. " Well of course because Seth MacFlare based you off them because he's some fricken lazy fatty with no life, " Peter said. Then a cat came in through the front door standing on two legs he sat on the bar stool and asked Horace for a glass of white wine. The cat was orange with a intelligent look on his face. " Hey who's that guy over there, " Peter asked Joe while pointing at the Cat " I don't know Peter why would you ask me, " Joe said with a little disgust " I'm gonna invite him over, " Peter said to the guys " Peter don't remember that time when you invited a cat to come sit with us," Cleveland says to Peter with alert in his voice A flash back appears and the guys are sitting in the same spot but with the Cat in The Hat next to them, he has a happy look on his face. " Hey cat why is your hat so tall, " Peter asked The Cat in The Hat. " Because Peter it has fun magical wonders inside it and there's nothing to hide it, " The Cat in The Hat said with a happy face " Magical wonders? Like what? " Peter sang in a tone will dancing up and down " Well Peter I can show you, " The Cat said while taking off his hat and taking out a large Red Box " There's Thing 1, and Thing 2, " The Cat said while opening the box " Thing 1 and Thing 2?" Peter asked in a singing voice. " Yes Thing 1 and Thing 2, " the Cat sang. " Every single time, " Joe said with distress in his voice It returns to present day and Peter is staring forward and so are the others. " Well it'll be different, this time guys trust me, " Peter said with a smile and stood up and walked to the Cat " Why hello Cat what's your name?" Peter said with sweetness in his voice " Oh hello my name is Kyle pleased to me you," The Cat said while shaking Peter's hand. " Aren't you a good kitty cat? Aren't you eh? Aren't you, " Peter said while petting Kyle's head. " You, you can stop now please it's kind off strange, " Kyle said to Peter who was still petting his head. Peter started stroking Kyle's back and all the way down to his tail, Kyle started to purr. " Does that feel good? Huh?" Peter asked Kyle. " Stop! Seriously it- ohhhh right there yeah that's good, " Kyle said with a calm voice and he purred again. " Good boy, come on! Come on!" Peter said. [/spoiler] [spoiler= Scene 2] It's in the Griffin house now and Chris is sitting on the couch watching T.V. while Brian is sitting down on the floor reading his novel, [i] The Senate's Remorse[/i]. Peter walks in with Kyle, Brian instinctively charges at Kyle and Kyle runs in a circle around the Couch. Kyle stops to rest while Brian is still running in a circle, he notices something on the ground a book and quickly reads through it, his eyes widen up. " Who wrote this book, " Kyle ask while holding it up. Brian stops and looks at Kyle with a smile and goes up to him. " I did, uh do you like it?" Brian asked. " Do I like it? Well yes! I do! You are a spectacular author," Kyle tells Brian with excitment " Well heheh thank you very much, " Brian says with a little bow. Then Stewie comes running down stairs and walks up to Brian " Oh Brian there you are! I just created three Yu-Gi-Oh cards on this cool site yugiohcardmaker.net it's so cool!" Stewie said jumping up and down he stops when he sees Kyle. " Hi I'm Kyle nice to meet you," Kyle said sticking out his hand. " Oh hi, names Stewart but people call me Stewie," said Stewie with a cool tone of voice. " I've been on that site before, " Kyle said to Stewie. " Oh really what's your name? " Stewie asked with excitement. " My username is Marblezone, " Kyle said with proud look on his face. " Oh, well your a bit bland and kind of an a**, " Stewie said with disappointment and walked back upstairs. Lois walks in the living room with a basket of laundry in her hands, she drops it on the site of Kyle. " Hey mom look! Dad got us a cat!" Chris said with excitement to Lois. " Peter! Why is there a cat in my living room?" Lois demands Peter. " Oh, hi I'm Kyle pleased to meet you," Kyle says while walking to Lois and sticking out one paw. " Oh my ehehe hi I'm Lois, " Lois says to Kyle while blushing, " Your a very nice cat." " Why thank you, I am one of the finest cats around," Kyle says to Lois proudly " Hey Kyle? Do you enjoy reading the works of John Grisham?" Brian asks Kyle. " John Grisham? He's my favorite author I do enjoy his works especially the recent one Playing For Pizza," Kyle says to Brian who wags his tail. " Oh just fantastic, the redemption plot is just fascinating," Brian says to Kyle. Kyle and Brian walk off into the Kitchen discussing authors and famous book titles. Meanwhile in Stewie's room Stewie is sitting on a stool with Rupert sitting next to him, Stewie is currently typing on his laptop, and talking to himself. " Dear YCM, Marblezone is in my house as we speak this jerk is a pussy. A pussy cat, yes. Was there any YCM Members in your house before? Discuss. - .:The Stewman:." Stewie says while finishing his writing, he clicks a few times. " Rupert, don't worry I'm still talking to Icy about your Perma-Post Lock," Stewie says while petting Rupert. Stewie looks at his laptop and scrolls down, " What the deuce! God Dammit Ianwatters I don't give a care about your uncle coming in your house!" [/spoiler] [spoiler=Scene 3] It has been a week since the arrival of Kyle, and as time passed Stewie grew more anxious of Brian's time. He realized that Brian and him haven't done a thing together, Stewie has no other friends (except for Rupert). Kyle and Brian are watching the Quahog News Channel on the TV. " Hello, I am Tom Tucker," Tom Tucker says. " And I'm Diane Simmons," says Diane Simmons while organizing papers. " Today's news, a new video on Youtube has been spreading the nation, but the video is by a 14 year old teen who is in love with Justin Bieber, but the shocking part is he's a boy!" Tom says with open eyes. " Luckily we got a chance to speak with Eric Douglas, now here's Trisha Takinawa, Trisha." Tom says while looking to Diane. The picture changes and it is now Trisha Takinawa with an angry teenager breathing deeply with an I <3 JB shirt on. " Eric you have posted a video saying that you will bring down anybody who mocks Justin Bieber," Trisha says in her mic before putting it in front of Eric's face. " That's right Trisha, I will DESTROY AND ANNIHILATE anybody who hates on Justin Bieber, I will find them track them down and have them ARRESTED! My uncle works for the SCC!" says Eric Douglas with a viscous face. Peter comes from the Kitchen and is about to sing a song about the SCC right before he is smacked on the head with a rolling pin by Lois and then he walks in the Kitchen slowly and sadly. " The comments on Youtube do not affect you?" Trisha asks Eric and then Eric grabs the Mic. " No they do not but I already have gotten 400 IP addresses from the Justin Bieber haters, YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE!" Eric says while putting his face to the camera and pointing at it as if the haters were in his face. " Are you gay and homo like your role model," Trisha says to Eric but then realizes what she says and her eyes widen (but only a small bit due to the fact that she is Asian.) Eric slowly turns his head to Trisha, he twitches as if ready to attack. " Uh this has been Trisha Takinawa with Eric Douglas!" Trisha quickly says and Eric Douglas jumps on Trisha but then the screen returns to Tom and Diane. " Damn kids these days," says Tom with disgust. The TV turns off and Brian and Kyle look at each other in silence then burst out laughing. " Oh man, he has four- heheh- four hundred IP adress," Brian says while giggling. " And - and he will murder anybody who hates on Justin Bieber," Kyle says and bursts out laughing again. Stewie walks down stairs and starts laughing with Kyle and Brian. " What are we laughing about, " Stewie says while laughing. Brian and Kyle stop laughing and Brian says, " Nothing." " Oh," Stewie says and sulks his head and walks away, right after he is outside of the Living Room Brian and Kyle resume laughing. [/spoiler][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted October 14, 2010 Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 yea not bad either, i liked the cat in the hat refrence lol i could definately see that as a family guy type of joke lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Templar Knox Posted October 14, 2010 Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 Little cheap shot thrown in their very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted October 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 Thanks for the comments! Scene Two has been edited more to come soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Templar Knox Posted October 14, 2010 Report Share Posted October 14, 2010 The edit made it better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted October 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2010 Do you guys thinks this will go out as a successful Fan-Fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted October 15, 2010 Report Share Posted October 15, 2010 >insert endless version of Peter's laugh here< 1) The Cat in the Hat part was perfect. 2) Lol Rupert = Mecha Pedobear 3) Referencing YCM was fine, but if your gunna be serious with this fic, dont do it all the time. Maybe, once every 7 episodes... 3) Because of Family Guy logic, in the end Stewie is gunna have to kill Kyle. Well... its true... [Fanfare Plays] [Cpt. Sorrow has recieved Atman's Seal of Approval!] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Templar Knox Posted October 15, 2010 Report Share Posted October 15, 2010 If you keep it going based on this first one then yes i think it will do good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted October 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2010 [quote name='Ātman' timestamp='1287108214' post='4705984'] >insert endless version of Peter's laugh here< 1) The Cat in the Hat part was perfect. [b]2) Lol Rupert = Mecha Pedobear[/b] 3) Referencing YCM was fine, but if your gunna be serious with this fic, dont do it all the time. Maybe, once every 7 episodes... 3) Because of Family Guy logic, in the end Stewie is gunna have to kill Kyle. Well... its true... [Fanfare Plays] [Cpt. Sorrow has recieved Atman's Seal of Approval!] [/quote] The 2nd one I was thinking about Herbert being Mecha Pedobear but then I remember when Rupert was some hot stud and he's playing in the ocean with Stewie, and Rupert has the pedobear look to him. And for the 3rd one (first 3rd one), Actually this will probably be the only episode with YCM reference, if constant requests for more YCM references then I'll probably do it once every 10 episodes or so because then it's gonna spoil the whole Family Guy feel to it, Thanks for your comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted October 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2010 A portion of Scene 3 has been added! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted October 18, 2010 Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 Dude honestly this is nice, I love the references and I like how you use typical Family Guy techniques.. The Cat in the Hat one was a good one made me laugh a bit lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted October 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 Thank you, well I'm not a Family guy Groupe but I am a big fan, and decoding the humor isn't hard.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted October 18, 2010 Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 [s]Dude, don't dis eric or he'll arrest you D:[/s] That part about MarbleZone was a bit uncalled for, but then again family guy does that stuff all the time with celebrities. The cat in the hat part was okay, but you could have ended it better like with peter calling him a bastard or them breaking up into a fight or even having that chicken fight peter then Peter returning to the clam with bruises and cuts. I'm dissapointed that you didn't make eric mention LifeInATent in this though. Other than these points, not bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted October 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 [quote name='King.' timestamp='1287389202' post='4714682'] [s]Dude, don't dis eric or he'll arrest you D:[/s] That part about MarbleZone was a bit uncalled for, but then again family guy does that stuff all the time with celebrities. The cat in the hat part was okay, but you could have ended it better like with peter calling him a bastard or them breaking up into a fight or even having that chicken fight peter then Peter returning to the clam with bruises and cuts. I'm dissapointed that you didn't make eric mention LifeInATent in this though. Other than these points, not bad. [/quote] Well, I didn't do LifeInATent because I saw that video AFTER I posted the Scene. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted October 19, 2010 Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 Scene 4? When's it coming out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted October 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2010 When I have the time.. And I have just watched Family Guy or something of that matter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted October 21, 2010 Report Share Posted October 21, 2010 Poor Stewie. Like I said before, in the end he's gunna kill Kyle. ......well.........it's true.............. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted October 21, 2010 Report Share Posted October 21, 2010 Yep just like he did to new brian. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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