TheManBehindtheice Posted October 15, 2010 Report Share Posted October 15, 2010 Please state your opinions on the cards,and what i can do to improve them. This is The First Card, it is callen Tirius the knight of the rise. [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/4799/298464p.jpg[/img] Lore This monster cannot be Normal summoned or set, To special summon this monster you must tribute 2 Warrior type monsters.Once summoned ths monster will increase the attack points of a Warrior type monster on your side of the field by 1000, while also decreasing the oponnents monsters attack points by 100 points. Here is the next card. [img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/902/298464y.jpg[/img] Then here is the third card. [img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/5779/298464w.jpg[/img] Now for the fourth card. [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/410/298464i.jpg[/img] Now for The fifth card [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/4975/298464.jpg[/img] Now for the sixth card. [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/5779/298464w.jpg[/img] Now for the seventh card. [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/9682/298464q.jpg[/img] Now for the eighth card. [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/476/298464l.jpg[/img] Now for the ninth card. [img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/4975/298464.jpg[/img] Now its time for the tenth. [img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/4975/298464.jpg[/img] Now the eleventh card. [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/902/298464y.jpg[/img] Now the twelvth card. [img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/5253/298464c.jpg[/img] now the thirteenth card [img]http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/3725/298464zg.jpg[/img]The Fourteenth card. Now the Fourteenth card. [img]http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/9682/298464q.jpg[/img] Now the Fifteenth card. [img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/4975/298464.jpg[/img] Now the first synchro. [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/3008/298464d.jpg[/img] To be continued..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheManBehindtheice Posted October 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2010 Hmm no replies yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doomassasinx Posted October 15, 2010 Report Share Posted October 15, 2010 .....3/10.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheManBehindtheice Posted October 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2010 [quote name='Doomassasinx' timestamp='1287107096' post='4705907'] .....3/10.... [/quote] How can i improve on these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~NOiSE~ Posted October 15, 2010 Report Share Posted October 15, 2010 [quote name='TheManBehindtheice' timestamp='1287107440' post='4705932'] How can i improve on these. [/quote] Very few of your monsters have effects, and the effects themselves aren't very creative. OCG, or Official Card Grammar, needs to be improved on as well. But don't slump to the depths of depression if your cards aren't the best, it takes time and practice. Look at some cards you own and try to stay as close as possible to the wordage they use in the official game, and be more creative with your effects, look for something outside the box, something that hasn't been seen before. Your cards look cool, they just wouldn't be the most useful in a duel. Take my word for it, I was there too, but I'm getting better and better as I go along =) Keep practicing! You can message me if you need advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Abs0lute Posted October 26, 2010 Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 Actually, I think Jester covered everything. Needing some pictures, better ones, with backgrounds. Mind viewing mine? It's Legend of Dark Hearts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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