forteller Posted October 16, 2010 Report Share Posted October 16, 2010 [img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/4888/291097.jpg[/img] When this monster is summoned successfully you can send it to the graveyard to special summon any "Fragment of Renix" monster from your deck. You can discard one card from your hand to destroy one face down card on the field if the selected card is not a trap its added to the owners hand instead. [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/1579/291097v.jpg[/img] When this monster is summoned successfully you can send it to the graveyard to special summon any "Fragment of Renix" monster from your deck. You can discard one card from your hand to destroy one face down card on the field if the selected card is not a spell its added to the owners hand instead. [img]http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/5156/291097k.jpg[/img] This monster cannot be Normal summoned or set.This monster cannot be destroyed by battle and is unaffected by traps that select this card as its target.When this card is attacked or attacks a monster put one death counter on this card. You can remove one death counter from this card to destroy one monster that is has battled. If this monster is sent to the graveyard except for tribute summon add one "Fragment of Renix: Life" to your hand from your Deck or graveyard. [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/9467/291097u.jpg[/img] This monster cannot be Normal summoned or set.This monster cannot be destroyed by battle and is unaffected by spells that select this card as its target. When this card is summoned put one Life counter on this card for every monster you control. When this monster is destroy and sent to the graveyard while their is 3 or more life counters on it special summon one monster from your graveyard. [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/3203/291097h.jpg[/img] If this monster is special summoned it is added to the owner's hand instead. when this card is successfully tribute summoned all other monster on your side are removed from play. you cannot control any other monsters while this card is face up on the field. this monster is unaffected by trap cards that target this monster. when this card is removed from the field return all cards removed from play by its effect back to their original position. [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/6058/291097z.jpg[/img] If this monster is special summoned it is added to the owner's hand instead. When this card is successfully tribute summoned special summon up to 3 monsters from your graveyard they cannot declare an attack and thier effect are negated. this card gains 300 atk for each monster on your side of the field other than itself. [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/9467/291097u.jpg[/img] This monster Cannot be Normal summoned or set. This monster can only be special summoned by Having three or more monsters in your graveyard with "Fragment of Renix" in their names. this monster gain 800 atk for each monster with "Fragment of Renix" in their name in the graveyard. Once per turn select one more in your graveyard with "Fragment of Renix" in their names and ad it to your deck then this card gains that monster effect till the end of the turn. I wanna make this my first set eventually so any suggestions would be nice any good ideas for any magic or trap support Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Neko Girl Posted October 16, 2010 Report Share Posted October 16, 2010 Very good cards sir. Since there are so many cards, I can't read all the OCG. So I give your cards and you a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forteller Posted October 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2010 thxs dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Archwing Posted October 17, 2010 Report Share Posted October 17, 2010 Congrats! your the first [s]victim[/s] person im going to use my new grading scale on Card names: Decent, Rather than a : i would use the - , The - is actually used on real cards so i think its more correct to use it. Pics: Also Decent, Nothing Special but they work, nothing to complain about but nothing to praise the pics about OCG: Im pretty bad with OCG so i dont really care but i noticed that in the first cards effect [quote]When this monster is summoned successfully you can send it to the graveyard to special summon any "Fragment of Renix" monster from your deck. You [u]card[/u] discards one card from your hand to destroy one face down card on the field if the selected card is not a trap its added to the owners hand instead. [/quote] You put "card" instead of can and put the lore down twice, you also put the lore down twice for Loneliness and theirs lore for a card that isnt there. Effects: pretty balanced. fairly intesting. I like them Balance: Death and Lifes ATK and DEF seem a bit low for a 4 star monster, i would make them 3 star monsters. Other than that the balance is fine. Dah little Extras: You dont have and "edition" or Set and card number down. Its not needed and isnt that important but its still worth somthing ;D You also didnt put down the maker or Serial # D: You kinda bombed the little extras section Overall my Grade is [size="4"][color="#FF8C00"]C+[/color][/size] This is a little bit above average, nothing too special but no big problems with them (Keep in mind that a C+ translates to about a 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forteller Posted October 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2010 none of the lore is copied dude some effect are very similar and may only vary by one or two words Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted October 17, 2010 Report Share Posted October 17, 2010 Hmm, 3 cards ( Hope, Unity and the forsaken Warrior didnt show up the last time i looked.....) Im not sure if my computer just didnt load them or what.... Well none the less The only problem i have is The Forsaken Warrior is OPed, when you summon him he has AT LEAST 3000 ATK. He'll probably have somthing like 6000 ATK and DEF when you summon him so find a way to tone him down. mabey put a limit on how high his ATK can go and decrease the ATK gain to 500-800... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forteller Posted October 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2010 yeah i get your ponit i will tone it down but you do have to move a fragment from the grave to the deck each turn so he will lose 1000 atk every turn until he has noneyeah i get your ponit i will tone it down but you do have to move a fragment from the grave to the deck each turn so he will lose 1000 atk every turn until he has noneand if i wanted to make it a set wat kind of traps and magic should i add?/? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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forteller Posted October 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2010 some changes made need help with the other card OCG thought Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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