A fairy Archetype

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This card can be used as two tributes for a tribute summon. When this card is summoned, you can discard a card in your hand to select one card in your graveyard and return it to your hand. If there is no "Valhalla, Hall of the Fallen" on the field, destroy.
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When this card is summoned, select one equip spell your opponent controls and equip it to this card.(ignoring the conditions) This card gains 100 ATK for each equip card on the field. Destroy this card if there is no "Valhalla, Hall of the Fallen " on the field.
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When this card is summoned, select one equip spell on the field and equip it to this card. (ignoring the conditions) This card gains 200 ATK for each spell on the field. If there is no "Valhalla, Hall of the Fallen" on the field, destroy this card.
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1 tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters
When this card is summoned, place one uni counter on a monster on the field. This card gains 100 ATK for all monsters with uni counters on the field. Once per turn, you can place one uni counter on a monster on the field. This card gains the effects of all monsters with uni counters. Destroy this card if you do not control a "Valhalla, Hall of the Fallen".
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When this card destroys a monster by battle, equip it with this card. This card gains the equipped monster's ATK, DEF, and effect. This card gains 200 ATK for each spell card on the field or in the graveyard. This card gains 100 ATK for each card on the field. (except this card)IF there is no "Valhalla, Hall of the Fallen" on the field, destroy this card.

All the names are in Japanese. Dorobo means thief. Shita Dorobo is body thief. Maha No Dorobo means Magic Thief. Daburu Dobo means Double Thief.

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Capitalise every word; it looks odd without.

First card is broken. Easy Graveyard to hand return is too powerful, especially for a Level 2. Almost every other card that returns to the hand have either been banned or have a one-for-one cost. Remove the second effect. Also, it overall doesn't seem to fit in with the rest of the cards.

Second card is odd. Needs to be increased to Level 3 or 4, since it has an easy ATK-gain effect and is a Tuner. A field Spell, opponent's Continuous Spell card and "United We Stand" or "Axe of Despair" turns this into a 2200 or 2400 easy beatstick that can rob your opponent of a specific Equip Spell.

Third card is utterly broken. Late in the game, you and your opponent will probably have between six or eight Spells each in the Graveyard, and since you're using Fairies, you'll probably control a "The Sanctuary in the Sky". For simplicity, call that 15 Spells in the Graveyard and on the field. This card therefore has 4800 ATK. Add that your opponent may control a pair of monsters, that's 5000 ATK. And when it destroys one of those monsters, it gains that monster's ATK and effect.

So, if this card destroys a "Monarch", you've got 7300 ATK. Or, if you "Creature Swap" a "Counter Fairy" or "Darklord", you damage your opponent (unless "Sanctuary" is on the field), give this card more ATK and then a useful effect to exploit. Compare this with "The Atmosphere". It too can control opponent's monsters, but it has to be Special Summoned and can only take one monster at a time. It also has no other way to increase its own attack. Re-think this one completely. (BTW, where you get the picture?)

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They will be fixed because they will be used by a character in my fan-fic.
The pics are from jazin kay's archive.

FIXED

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