My naruto cards

[XxXdark_angel]

They may be bad but this is my first time making them

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[-Athena-]

Can you post them normal size or post the lore because I can't read it...
But from what I could see:
-Okay pictures. Just change some of them (EX: the 1st one should have a background)
-Don't do fake types
-I don't get the last card. Why is it 8 stars if the ATK is 250 and the DEF is 300?

[XxXdark_angel]

[quote name='-Athena-' timestamp='1287443010' post='4716096']
Can you post them normal size or post the lore because I can't read it...
But from what I could see:
-Okay pictures. Just change some of them (EX: the 1st one should have a background)
-Don't do fake types
-I don't get the last card. Why is it 8 stars if the ATK is 250 and the DEF is 300?
[/quote]

Yea no worries
i didn't mean to do that i messed up when i did it

[Мερhilεs]

[color="#800080"][b][center]Seduction should probably be a Spell or Trap Card... and if you want to keep it like how it is then fine, but why is it Lvl.12 with such low ATK/DEF? Might wanna change that...

Too tired to comment any more, but I'll say this: I won't pound you 'cause you're a new member but honestly, they aren't that great. I reserve my rate until you improve. Until then, check out real Yu-gi-oh cards/other peoples' threads and the like, and learn a bit. Have fun, and good night.[/center][/b][/color]

[RedRecker]

I agree with Mephiles here. I mean, to be honest there is so much wrong with the cards here I'm not even convinced you know anything at all about Yugioh cards. Seduction has been made as a Ritual Monster but is given a spell or trap like effect. Illusion Bells talks about being equipped but it's a Continuous Spell Card. Mind Control is a Field Trap. Now, unless the rules have really changed since the last time I played there is no such thing. Fake types is something I really don't like and it crops up a lot in the Pop Culture thread. (Well, at least it used to, haven't been on the forums for quite some time). Nevertheless, take a look at some real Yugioh cards. Look around at other threads and find the good, strong, popular threads and see what it is about them that makes it so. Now, this doesn't mean look at their ideas and take them but rather gain some understanding of what it is to make a good card before diving too much into the middle of it all. Although, I'll admit, this advice will be rather relative. If you want to make good, strong and fairly realistic cards (meaning close to what you might expect of a real card) then it might be good to think about what I said above. If you're really not that bothered and would much rather use the Yugioh Card Maker to mess around, that's fine and you wouldn't really need to bother much with what I've had to say.

So yeah, this might all sound rather critical (and well I guess it is) but I'm not trying to put you down and put you off. I'd much rather help a new member such as yourself so you can get more out of being on this forum. I honestly hope what I've had to say has helped and if you want any advice, I'd be happy to give it to you.

[XxXdark_angel]

[quote name='RedRecker' timestamp='1287489023' post='4717458']
I agree with Mephiles here. I mean, to be honest there is so much wrong with the cards here I'm not even convinced you know anything at all about Yugioh cards. Seduction has been made as a Ritual Monster but is given a spell or trap like effect. Illusion Bells talks about being equipped but it's a Continuous Spell Card. Mind Control is a Field Trap. Now, unless the rules have really changed since the last time I played there is no such thing. Fake types is something I really don't like and it crops up a lot in the Pop Culture thread. (Well, at least it used to, haven't been on the forums for quite some time). Nevertheless, take a look at some real Yugioh cards. Look around at other threads and find the good, strong, popular threads and see what it is about them that makes it so. Now, this doesn't mean look at their ideas and take them but rather gain some understanding of what it is to make a good card before diving too much into the middle of it all. Although, I'll admit, this advice will be rather relative. If you want to make good, strong and fairly realistic cards (meaning close to what you might expect of a real card) then it might be good to think about what I said above. If you're really not that bothered and would much rather use the Yugioh Card Maker to mess around, that's fine and you wouldn't really need to bother much with what I've had to say.

So yeah, this might all sound rather critical (and well I guess it is) but I'm not trying to put you down and put you off. I'd much rather help a new member such as yourself so you can get more out of being on this forum. I honestly hope what I've had to say has helped and if you want any advice, I'd be happy to give it to you.
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yea i relized half the mistakes i've made and i'm fixing them now as we speak, but i'm not really good with making them right now

[RoxasReaper]

Not bad cards, personally i think mine are better but then again ive been in this longer lol, not bad though.