Akina-Rei Posted October 17, 2010 Report Share Posted October 17, 2010 Here is the first one. [img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/2236/122335c.jpg[/img] Lore :This card can be Special Summoned when a Level 5 or higher DARK monster is sent to the Graveyard. Choose an attribute. When this card is summoned, all monsters with the attribute selected are destroyed. When a LIGHT monster is sent to your Graveyard, increase your life points by it's attack points. [img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/8906/122335k.jpg[/img] Lore : This card inflict double-damages to Fiend-Type monsters. When your opponent summons a Fiend-Type monster, toss a coin. If Head, the monster can be Normal Summoned. If Tails, the monster is sent to your opponent's Graveyard and you receive life points equal to the monster's DEF. If you see ant OCG errors, and I know there are, you'd be very kind to tel me where so that I could correct it like I did with Masked Angel. And, by the way, I'll be posting one card each week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaime Duferier Posted October 17, 2010 Report Share Posted October 17, 2010 Let's play a little game of spot the difference... YOU DID THIS: Choose an element. When this card enters the field, every monster of this element are sent to the Graveyard. When a LIGHT monster is sent to your Graveyard, add its ATK to your Life Points. I edited it: Choose an attribute. When this card is summoned, all monsters with the attribute selected are destroyed. When a LIGHT monster is sent to your Graveyard, increase your life points by it's attack points. OP'd, 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akina-Rei Posted October 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2010 Thanks for correcting my poor OCG I know I have some difficulties with it, so I am very grateful to you. Correcting this right away Only problem ... I tried to change the wrong OCG with the good one. And you can't read anything. So I'll leave the wrong OCG on the card and place the good one as a lore. I think that should make it. ' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaime Duferier Posted October 17, 2010 Report Share Posted October 17, 2010 ok then. i don't think people have a problem with that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akina-Rei Posted October 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2010 Pfew ... thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akina-Rei Posted October 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 Update done : Demon Hunter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted October 22, 2010 Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 *randomly appears* Just to make it clear, monster can be sent from the field to the Graveyard without being Tributed or destroyed. [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Chimeratech_Overdragon"][color="#000000"]Chimeratech Overdragon[/color][/url] is the most noticeable example. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akina-Rei Posted October 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 I don't see where is the problem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted October 22, 2010 Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 Not to you... to Shiny's reply. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akina-Rei Posted October 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 Ah, ok. I didn't understand ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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