Jump to content

Replay your entire turn!

~NOiSE~

By ~NOiSE~
in Casual Cards

Recommended Posts

~NOiSE~ Newbie

~NOiSE~

Posted
Posted

I thought this would be an interesting idea. What if you could go back and correct a mistake you made during your turn? O_o

Updated, now slightly more balanced. Any suggestions would be great, please rate and provide constructive criticism~ :lol:

Any OCG suggestions would be appreciated as well, since I don't think there are any cards in Yu-Gi-Oh! to base the effect off of.

[img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/2060/273918l.jpg[/img]

[center]Card Lore: This card can only be used once in the Duel. All cards in both player's hand, Deck, Graveyard and on the field are placed back where they were at the start of this turn, except this card. Both player's Life Points become equal to what they were at the start of this turn. Take your turn again. [/center]

Also, if anyone would be willing to check out my latest set, that'd be really cool~
They can be found here:
[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/225389-deus-ex-machina-the-bridge-between-light-and-darkness/"]Deus Ex Cards[/url]

Thanks for viewing!

Link to comment
Share on other sites
~NOiSE~ Newbie

~NOiSE~

Posted
  • Author
Posted
Bump. Why does no one look at my cards?

[quote name='forteller' timestamp='1287459105' post='4716995']
lol this card would be awesome for me cuz i play a very aggersive deck lol so when i get mirror forced i can start all over lol im happy with this card 8\10 sorry I'm go good with OCG
[/quote]

Thanks for commenting!
Link to comment
Share on other sites
-Athena- Newbie

-Athena-

Posted
Posted

You can't bump that fast. THere's a 24 hrs rule. And you gotta be patient for reviews.

Onto the card:
-You have alot OCG errors
-Picture matches the name however, it's pretty boring to look at (you should holo it or something)
-Name describes the effect perfectly, however, it's extremely plain (maybe turn it into redorato[it's a stupid name but slightly more interesting])
-Effect is slightly confusing. It's kinda like the card "Reload" but you get to start the turn over. Sorta useless for me but it can be useful sometime
-Effect is creative
-The card in general is pretty balanced, however, it would be more balanced if you set a cost to it

[b]Overall, 6.9/10.[/b]
I haven't seen the effect before but good job! :) But I know you can improve!

Link to comment
Share on other sites
~NOiSE~ Newbie

~NOiSE~

Posted
  • Author
Posted

[quote name='-Athena-' timestamp='1287461081' post='4717069']
You can't bump that fast. THere's a 24 hrs rule. And you gotta be patient for reviews.

Onto the card:
-You have alot OCG errors
-Picture matches the name however, it's pretty boring to look at (you should holo it or something)
-Name describes the effect perfectly, however, it's extremely plain (maybe turn it into redorato[it's a stupid name but slightly more interesting])
-Effect is slightly confusing. It's kinda like the card "Reload" but you get to start the turn over. Sorta useless for me but it can be useful sometime
-Effect is creative
-The card in general is pretty balanced, however, it would be more balanced if you set a cost to it

[b]Overall, 6.9/10.[/b]
I haven't seen the effect before but good job! :) But I know you can improve!
[/quote]

Sorry, didn't know about the 24-hour rule ._.

I'm aware of the OCG errors. OCG usually isn't a problem for me, but with this card's unique effect, I couldn't find any real [i]Yu-Gi-Oh![/i] card to use as reference :unsure: Any suggestions would be appreciated! :lol:

Anyway, this card was one of my attempts to step outside the box. Would you check out my [i]Deus Ex[/i] cards previously posted?

Link to comment
Share on other sites
Scyire Newbie

Scyire

Posted
Posted
[quote name='Welche' timestamp='1287461536' post='4717089']
Athena is stupid, and so is his precious OCG.

This card is overpowered and almost impossible to actually work. Irreparable game state anyone?
[/quote]
Rep given where rep is earned. I'm glad someone actually pointed out how much of a moron Athena is.

Card would never work. Would be instantly banned.

0/10
Link to comment
Share on other sites
~NOiSE~ Newbie

~NOiSE~

Posted
  • Author
Posted
[quote name='Welche' timestamp='1287461536' post='4717089']
Athena is stupid, and so is his precious OCG.

This card is overpowered and almost impossible to actually work. Irreparable game state anyone?
[/quote]

Maybe provide constructive criticism? Helpful advice would be much appreciated.
Link to comment
Share on other sites
-Athena- Newbie

-Athena-

Posted
Posted

[quote name='Welche' timestamp='1287461536' post='4717089']
Athena is stupid, and so is his precious OCG.

This card is overpowered and almost impossible to actually work. Irreparable game state anyone?
[/quote]
Thanks for the compliment :) lol
Anyways, it's quite easy to use. All you need to do it play it. No cost or anything.
However, the effect could be easily overused. I only said it was balanced because I didn't think about how you can reuse this card and keep the game to your advantage....so yeah, stupid me :( I'll lover the rating a little: 4/10

Link to comment
Share on other sites
Scyire Newbie

Scyire

Posted
Posted
[quote name='jesterhead92' timestamp='1287461924' post='4717106']
Maybe provide constructive criticism? Helpful advice would be much appreciated.
[/quote]

Here's some advice: Use common sense when making a card.
This outrageously dumb idea for a card has actually been done before, and subsequently banned.
http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Fiber_Jar

Make cards that you know won't get immediantly get banned if released in the TCG.
Thats why cards here are called "realistic".
Link to comment
Share on other sites
forteller Newbie

forteller

Posted
Posted
ok here is why this card could be banned it is far too loopy(full of loopholes) first and biggest problem is it dosent affect cards that are already in play on the field lol
check this out i have three blue eye dragon i fuse them for ultimate then attack my opponent uses mirror force i use redo get all my blue eyes back i know wat they have face down and can summon another monster wtf not fair.
Link to comment
Share on other sites
Welche the crab Newbie

Welche the crab

Posted
Posted
[quote name='Scyire' timestamp='1287462191' post='4717113']
Here's some advice: Use common sense when making a card.
This outrageously dumb idea for a card has actually been done before, and subsequently banned.
http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Fiber_Jar

Make cards that you know won't get immediantly get banned if released in the TCG.
Thats why cards here are called "realistic".
[/quote]

Close, but that's a duel reset, this is only turn.
Link to comment
Share on other sites
Scyire Newbie

Scyire

Posted
Posted
[quote name='Welche' timestamp='1287462370' post='4717122']
Close, but that's a duel reset, this is only turn.
[/quote]

True.

[b]Final Say:[/b] You cant 'reset' a turn in Yugioh. No matter how, you just can't. That's why I find this card to be unrealistic and thus deserves a 0/10.
Link to comment
Share on other sites
~NOiSE~ Newbie

~NOiSE~

Posted
  • Author
Posted
[quote name='forteller' timestamp='1287462650' post='4717134']
Did you even read my comment?
[/quote]

Yes I did. I don't think it's that unfair, there are cards that let you look at cards that are Set on the field. Knowing your opponent has a Trap Card doesn't give you that much of an advantage O_o
Link to comment
Share on other sites
~NOiSE~ Newbie

~NOiSE~

Posted
  • Author
Posted
[quote name='forteller' timestamp='1287462340' post='4717118']
ok here is why this card could be banned it is far too loopy(full of loopholes) first and biggest problem is it dosent affect cards that are already in play on the field lol
check this out i have three blue eye dragon i fuse them for ultimate then attack my opponent uses mirror force i use redo get all my blue eyes back i know wat they have face down and can summon another monster wtf not fair.
[/quote]

Thank you for pointing out that it doesn't affect cards on the field, I forgot to add that in when I made the card. It wouldn't really be a "redo" otherwise xP
Link to comment
Share on other sites
~NOiSE~ Newbie

~NOiSE~

Posted
  • Author
Posted
[quote name='forteller' timestamp='1287463086' post='4717149']
plus sense the cards on the field are unaffected you get to summon another monster it ends up being like one card that could end up doing the job it would usually take five different cards to do thats wat im saying dude might wanna adjust the effect some more
[/quote]

Updated effect, affects cards on the field as well. Thanks for pointing that out~
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Archived

This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.

Go to topic listing
×
×
  • Create New...