Master of Sabers Posted October 21, 2010 Report Share Posted October 21, 2010 Here is my first set. What do you think? I think some of the pics could use improvement, but... [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/921/237343.jpg[/img] When your opponent controls more cards than you, you can special summon this card when it is removed from play, or in your hand. If this card is selected as a target, you can remove from play this card to negate the effect, and destroy it. [img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/730/237343g.jpg[/img] When there is another "Music" monster on the field, you can send one card you control to the graveyard to add one card with "Music" in it's name from your deck to your hand. [img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/921/237343.jpg[/img] When there is another "Music" monster on the field, you can select one magic or trap card on the field. Until next turn, the selected card cannot be activated. [img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/7927/237343x.jpg[/img] Once per turn, select one monster on the field. Until your next turn, the selected card cannot attack, or activate it's effect. When this card is sent to the graveyard, select 1 "Music" card from your deck, and add it to your hand. [img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/921/237343.jpg[/img] When there is another "Music" monster on the field, you can special summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can shuffle any number of cards from your hand into your deck, and draw the same number of cards. [img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/2720/237343s.jpg[/img] When there is another face up "Music" card on the field, you can negate the activation of a spell or trap card, and return it to it's original position. [img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/921/237343.jpg[/img] When there is another face up "Music" card on the field, you can tribute this card to switch the attack and defense of all monsters on the field until your next draw phase. [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/921/237343.jpg[/img] Once per turn, during any players turn, you can select one card on the field. This card's effect becomes that card's effect. You can only use each effect once per turn. This card copies effects of spell and trap cards as well as monster cards. [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/1803/237343o.jpg[/img] Activate only when you control 3 or more face up "Music" cards. Return all cards on the field to their owners hand. This card can only be activated at the Standby Phase, and you cannot normal summon the turn this card is activated. This card's effect cannot be negated. [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/921/237343.jpg[/img] You can activate each of the following effects once per turn if you control the corresponding number of "Music" cards. 1.) Gain 500 life points. 2.) Your opponent loses 500 life points. 3.) One monster on the field gains 500 ATK. 4.) One monster on the field loses 500 ATK. 5.) Draw one card. 6.) Your opponent destroys one card they control. [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/6097/237343u.jpg[/img] All "Music" monsters you control gain 400 DEF. When a "Music" card you control is destroyed by your opponent, select one of the following effects. 1.) Return that card to your deck. 2.) Add one "Music" card from your deck to your hand. 3.) Your opponent's turn ends. [img]http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/921/237343.jpg[/img] When you control a "Music" monster, select 2 cards on each the field. Return the selected cards to the deck. For each card returned, Each player draws one card. This card stays face up until the end phase of the turn it was played. [img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/921/237343.jpg[/img] Only activate when you control 4 or more "music" cards. Remove from play all cards in both players hands. Each player takes 600 damage for each card removed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted October 21, 2010 Report Share Posted October 21, 2010 Names: Very basic/Bland Pics: Avoid at all cost real life pics, for music based things id look up vocaloid OCG: Im horrible at OCG myself but i can tell you that words like Special Summoned need to be capitalized (Im not counting OCG towards you Overall Grade, just a heads up) Effects:Meh, All pretty basic effects Balance: Well in terms of ATK/DEF to Stars your fine but i dont understand how flute can kill anything..... o_O Demonic Flutes? The little Extras: (This also dont really effect you overall grade and most people dont give a flying Fudgecake about this stuff But...) All the set numbers on the cards are the same (AKA their all MUSIC - 001) And the Serial number is the same on all of them These could quite honestly use quite a bit of work. Might i suggest tutorials? Great card makers make those for a reason...... I think they could help you better than i can. Overall [size="4"][color="#FF8C00"]D-[/color][/size] Not that great but at least the idea is original ;D which is a good sign, if you keep at it im sure you'll end up being a great card maker. BTW i cant read the name but i remember that game (The one thats in your Avatar) >_< I cant remember its name! I must knowz! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forteller Posted October 21, 2010 Report Share Posted October 21, 2010 [quote name='Archwing' timestamp='1287630017' post='4722251'] Names: Very basic/BlandPics: Avoid at all cost real life pics, for music based things id look up vocaloidOCG: Im horrible at OCG myself but i can tell you that words like Special Summoned need to be capitalized (Im not counting OCG towards you Overall Grade, just a heads up)Effects:Meh, All pretty basic effectsBalance: Well in terms of ATK/DEF to Stars your fine but i dont understand how flute can kill anything..... o_O Demonic Flutes?The little Extras: (This also dont really effect you overall grade and most people dont give a flying Fudgecake about this stuff But...) All the set numbers on the cards are the same (AKA their all MUSIC - 001) And the Serial number is the same on all of themThese could quite honestly use quite a bit of work. Might i suggest tutorials? Great card makers make those for a reason...... I think they could help you better than i can.Overall [size="4"][color="#FF8C00"]D-[/color][/size] Not that great but at least the idea is original ;D which is a good sign, if you keep at it im sure you'll end up being a great card maker. BTW i cant read the name but i remember that game (The one thats in your Avatar) >_< I cant remember its name! I must knowz! [/quote] he's actually rite besides the effects i think the effects are pretty good just bad OCG which is hard to learn for some but anyway look at some of the other cards in the forum get a feel for how cards should look and be worded and start off with singles dude get your ocg down before making sets or esle your wasting your time Plus when you post let cards people wil be able to help you fix them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Sabers Posted October 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2010 The avatar is "Chex Quest" Thx for the comments. I'll try again after the tutorials. I just don't want something that is not original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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