"Kuroi Tenshi Sara" and "Kuroi tenshi akuma satsugai enjeru ryu"

[Kazuma]

[spoiler='Izure ka no nedan de 2tsu no (Two for the price of One)'][img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/3586/266555v.jpg[/img]
When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 "Kuroi Tenshi" monster from your deck except " Kuroi Tenshi Sara". Its effects are negated.
[img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/9985/266555q.jpg[/img]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except when your opponent Summones a monster with 3000 or more ATK. This card cannot attack directly. When this card destroyes a monster on your opponents side of the field, half your opponents Life Points. Your opponent takes no Battle Damage from any of this cards attacks.
(The name of this monster means "Black Angel Demon Slaying Angel Dragon")[/spoiler]

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

Potentially interesting set. Love the name and pic on the first one, seems a handy effect though obviously depends on future monsters as to it's use. OCG seems a bit off regarding 'It's effect is negated' but there are others that will cover that better than me, I can tell you Deck should be capitalized if you are deeply concerned about every little detail (I like OCG to look as close as possible but I won't bite people's heads off at little things like that ).

Now let's see if the next card is just as aw------ OMG it's Divine!! With 4500 ATK!! These things do not go down well. The effect is pretty nifty and creative though, balanced too if it wasn't for the monostrous ATK. Summoning condition is fair too and you could (possibly should) even thrown in the ability to Special Summon it from the Deck. So make it a DARK Attribute, lower it's ATK (maybe the ATK in the condition too) and shorten the name a bit and it will be a good card.

Hope this helps. Would like to this continued.

[Buttercup]

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