The Ancients

[Hunduel]

[center][size="5"][b]Ancient Gear Bludragon[/b][/size]

[img]http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/4688/ancientgearbludragon.jpg[/img]

[spoiler=Effect]This card's Summon cannot be negated by Spell or Trap Cards. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 EARTH "Ancient Gear" or "Gadget" monster with an ATK of 1500 or less. This card can be treated as 2 Tributes for the Tribute Summon of an "Ancient Gear" monster.[/spoiler]

[size="5"][b]Ancient Gear Sentinel[/b][/size]

[img]http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/6821/ancientgearsentinel.png[/img]

[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Tributed. You can Tribute 1 "Ancient Gear" monster on your side of the field to negate the activation of 1 Spell or Trap Card OR destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field. You cannot activate this effect if this card attacks. If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate any Spell or Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step.[/spoiler][/center]

[i]Pictures were made by me. They will be posted soon in my showcase topic. [/i]

Suggestions are welcomed about the card.

[Lexadin]

Mhh, I'm not a big fan of changing the typical Ancient Gear effect to a free Summon, seeing as it was way more threatening before.

But I like it's other effects, and I like and apriciate the homemade pic.

So a 8/10 would be fitting.

PS. If you save cards made on MSE as PNG file the card will be clearer.

[Hunduel]

I know that's not a typical effect, but the fact that its Summon cannot be negated is also an immunity against Spells and Traps. But I think its summoning effect can be really helpful, since it can Summon cards like Engineer and can speed up the Pure Ancient Gear, which is really slow now in my opinion.

Thanks for the rating!

PS.: Thanks for the advice! I didn't know about it.

[♠>:Stick-Man:<♠]

This card is very well balanced and i can't wait for more like this, as i can see MSE cards are better in my opinion as well, anyways 10' for the awesome card. Keep the great job going

[Hunduel]

Thanks for the rating. If I find more images, I'll make more support card for this archetype.

[♠>:Stick-Man:<♠]

Good! I can't wait like i said before.

[Hunduel]

Updated the topic with a new card: Ancient Gear Sentinel

[-DOOM]

Holy crap, where did you get those renders from? Could you give me a link?

OT:

Not that OCG correction is important, but it's the only thing I'm good at:unsure:

1st card:
[b]The Summon of this card[/b] cannot be negated by Spell or Trap Cards. When this card is [b]destroyed by battle[/b] and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 EARTH "Ancient Gear" or "Gadget" monster with [b]1500 ATK or less [from where?][/b]. This card can be treated as 2 Tributes for the Tribute Summon of an "Ancient Gear" monster.


It's pretty much balanced I guess, however, the first part of its effect seems to be kinda unnecessary, since nobody would negate the summon of this card. They would rather negate the summon of the Ancient Gear Golem you Tribute Summoned by tributing this card. The rest seems fine for me.


2nd card:
This card cannot be Tributed. [b]The Summon of this card[/b] cannot be negated by Trap Cards. You can Tribute 1 "Ancient Gear" monster [b]you control[/b] to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card OR destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent [b]controls[/b].


This card is kinda weak. It's basically a Doomcaliber Knight for Spell and Traps with very low ATK, whick makes it bad IMO. And I think your probably not going to use its 2nd effect very much, since Ancient Gears usually don't swarm very well, given that many of them can't be Special Summoned. Just give it a bit more Staying Power, more ATK or DEF, and it will be alright IMO.


Nice job, keep it up

[Hunduel]

These are render from the Planetrender, but they were REALLY edited.

However, OCGs are not bad, since these sentences can be found in cards - just old ones. There are unnecessary parts of the sentences.

1st Card: I know that the first effect is unnecessary, but it just give the effect which makes him Ancient Gear: immunity by "magic" (S/T), even if it's just a half-immunity.

2nd Card: Yeah I know that it's not so strong. I'll give it the usual attack-Gear effect, and a lil boost.

EDIT: Ok, Updated the first post, modified the 2nd card.

[-DOOM]

[quote name='hunduel' timestamp='1287779026' post='4726381']
These are render from the Planetrender, but they were REALLY edited.

[b]Could you give me a link please? I mean, there are hundreds of renders on planetrenders...[/b]

However, OCGs are not bad, since these sentences can be found in cards - just old ones. There are unnecessary parts of the sentences.

[b]True. I just like the new grammar more^^[/b]

1st Card: I know that the first effect is unnecessary, but it just give the effect which makes him Ancient Gear: immunity by "magic" (S/T), even if it's just a half-immunity.

[b]That's a point. [/b]

2nd Card: Yeah I know that it's not so strong. I'll give it the usual attack-Gear effect, and a lil boost.


EDIT: Ok, Updated the first post, modified the 2nd card.

[b]Ok. Personally, I would raise its DEF to 1900. This way, it has more staying power and can be summoned with the first card [/b]

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[Hunduel]

For 2nd card, I agree, I'll increase its effect. The reason why I add the same ATK and DEF that some of the Ancient Gears has the same stats.

For the links, I'll send them in PM soon. Are you interested in 1st or 2nd render, or both?

[-DOOM]

[quote name='hunduel' timestamp='1287836766' post='4728205']
For 2nd card, I agree, I'll increase its effect. The reason why I add the same ATK and DEF that some of the Ancient Gears has the same stats.

For the links, I'll send them in PM soon. Are you interested in 1st or 2nd render, or both?
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Both would be cool