snowyash Posted October 22, 2010 Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 I was hoping for this to go into Realistic, but the nature of the theme probably means I'll have to use images from the game Dante's Inferno or even Devil May Cry, so posting here will probably mean I'll avoid some flaming. Ok, feel free to rate, CnC, offer OCG/Effect Improvements or just anything helpful really. [spoiler=Inferno] [spoiler=The First Circle] [img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/1439/298805.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b] Destroy this card during your 2nd Standby Phase after activation. After this, you can move to the field and activate 1 'The Second Circle - Lust' from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. [img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/1439/298805.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b] This card can only be Summoned while 'The First Cirle - Limbo' exists on your side of the field. If this card destroys an opponents monster by battle, you can add 1 'Demon' card with the same Level as the destroyed monster from your Deck to your hand. [/spoiler] [spoiler=The Second Circle] [img]http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/348/298805o.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b] Destroy this card during your 2nd Standby Phase after activation. After this, you can move to the field and activate 1 'The Third Circle - Gluttony' from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/25p1zt5.jpg[/IMG] [b]Lore[/b] This card can only be Summoned while 'The Second Cirle - Lust' exists on your side of the field. Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to take control of one Monster card your opponent controls. The selected card can not be used for any form of Summon, and is destroyed at the End Phase. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] So, yep, these are based on the The Divine Comedy, written by Dante Alighieri, back in either the 13th or 14th century AD. I know the circle cards pictures are crap, and will remain so until I find better pics. I will add more cards as I go along. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted October 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2010 Not even a view? Come on people. At least look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Мερhilεs Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 [color="#800080"][b][center]They're good. I find the monsters' pics both slightly disturbing and very awesome... if that's possible at all. You have a few errors, like "if this card exists on your side of the field" when it should probably be "if you have a face-up (blah blah blah) on the field". If I had to rate you, I'd give out a 9/10. [/center][/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted October 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 [quote name='Mephiles of Darkness' timestamp='1287835792' post='4728189'] [color="#800080"][b][center]They're good. I find the monsters' pics both slightly disturbing and very awesome... if that's possible at all. You have a few errors, like "if this card exists on your side of the field" when it should probably be "if you have a face-up (blah blah blah) on the field". If I had to rate you, I'd give out a 9/10. [/center][/b][/color] [/quote] Thanks for the rate and OCG fix. Probably more than anything, thanks for actually making a comment. I thought no one was going to bother for a while there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Мερhilεs Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 [color="#800080"][b][center]Ahaha... believe me, I know how you feel, my thread is practically dead. Your welcome. I'll keep an eye on this topic and see how you fare.[/center][/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted October 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2010 BUMP Come on... I bet this is because it's not Naruto, Pokemon or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheDarkAce Posted October 24, 2010 Report Share Posted October 24, 2010 Really creative 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raine Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 I wanted to pull a Dantes Inferno set but I had trouble with images add all 9 circles to a complete set it would be pretty awesome and with the whole set Demon archetype would be very threatening. Small OCG errors but what do I care. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted October 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 [quote name='GrandRaine' timestamp='1287972172' post='4734369'] I wanted to pull a Dantes Inferno set but I had trouble with images add all 9 circles to a complete set it would be pretty awesome and with the whole set Demon archetype would be very threatening. Small OCG errors but what do I care. 8/10 [/quote] That is the main problem. I was considering having the circles as written while carrying on with the demons. Also, I'm having second thoughts on the system of going through circles. It just doesn't seem right - too slow and open. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raine Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 [quote name='SKizophrenIK117' timestamp='1287972851' post='4734404'] That is the main problem. I was considering having the circles as written while carrying on with the demons. Also, I'm having second thoughts on the system of going through circles. It just doesn't seem right - too slow and open. [/quote] I see you should have the first 8 circles to be usable at anytime and reserve the 9th (for betrayal and this includes Satan) as a ultimate card with the ultimate demon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted October 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 I hadn't considered that. Even so it would render a lot of cards unplayabe due to their reliance on their respective circle, although it would open more space to have various cards out. Out of interest, how would you view it working? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krazyxgamer Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 some OCG error stuff the pics are alright i think they are pretty good trust me, my threads are just me bumping the thread and nobody comments on them lol just a suggestion, but i think the circles should have an additional effect and make it "Destroy this card during the 3rd Standby Phase after activation" 2 is sort of short and adding a general searcher would make it a lot faster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted October 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 [quote name='krazyxgamer' timestamp='1287980485' post='4734748'] some OCG error stuff the pics are alright i think they are pretty good trust me, my threads are just me bumping the thread and nobody comments on them lol just a suggestion, but i think the circles should have an additional effect and make it "Destroy this card during the 3rd Standby Phase after activation" 2 is sort of short and adding a general searcher would make it a lot faster [/quote] I have noticed that most of the more active topics are more anime based, but you could expect that from pop culture. I'm glad that there have been some good post in here, so thanks all! For the Circles, I'd planned on 2nd Standby just to sorta help move through the different Circles a bit quicker, but I think the searcher idea is a good one and I'll follow up on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cornholio2007 Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 These demons look like fun people, especially that cleopatra. But these cards are awesome, the grammars good so i would rate it 9.999999999/10 lol. The circles could be landscapes of what the circles of hell look like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted October 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 Wish you'd have said that when I was making them... (Me and cornholio are, unfortunately, brothers.) 9.999999999? I'm rounding that up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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