Face McShooty Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 [img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/5774/248172x.jpg[/img] This Monster can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Level 4 or higher Machine-Type monsters. After this card is Special Summoned, remove 1 Machine-Type monster in your Graveyard from play. This card can attack twice per turn. This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 At 1st, it seemed a little Op'd. Now, it seems Up'd. You have to Tribute 3 Lv 4 or higher Machine-Type monsters just to summon this? I think those 3 would be more useful in the long run. Also, its ATK and DEF are really low for a Lv 8. I've seen Lv 5's with higher ATK. I have no comments on the Can ATK twice per Turn, which would really be Battle Phase. Also, I don't get the point of removing 1 Machine-Type Monster from your Graveyard out of play. But it might be useful in some strategies. If it can't attack your opponents life points directly, whats the point? But your Pic is perfection. Up'd, OCG Errors, Good pic though. 5/10. Its a decent effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted October 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 i figured, if it can't attack directly, it'll drag the duel out a little longer and make it to where you can possibly summon a stronger monster like BEWD and yes 3 Machine-Types, cuz a normal Level 8 would take 3 monsters to tribute and since this is made of entirely machines, i figured why not do something around that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~{Rochster}~ Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 OCG fix: This Monster can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Level 4 or high[b]er[/b] Machine-Type monsters. After this card is Special Summoned, remove 1 Machine-Type monster in your Graveyard from play. This card can attack twice per turn. This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly. Other then that, pretty good card. It's pretty balenced, just low ATK and DEF. 6/10 Not bad. ~{Weep badies (body), sleep on fat, farts}~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted October 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 alright, thanks Rochster, it's fix'd... even the ATK and DEF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 Let me help with one last error. "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Summoned by Tributing 3 LV 4 or higher Machine-Type monsters." Now the OCG should be good. With these fixes and such, plus the higher ATK and DEF, I bump mine up by 2. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~{Rochster}~ Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 7/10 is a good rating. Now ATK is too high, but don't change it, this is pop culture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted October 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 [quote name='Mako109' timestamp='1287813515' post='4727851'] This card can only be Summoned by Tributing 3 LV 4 or higher Machine-Type monsters." [/quote] idk bout this part but thanks for the other, i'll fix it prolly tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 I know it's correct. I have been told this same correction countless times. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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