I-dreezyAFG Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 instead of going trick (and) treating this year im going to watch a horror movie with my friends and cousins. but i want horror stories. this is mine. although i kinda suck at it. it was almost new year, like mid december, when i heard on the news channel today was the 30th anniversary of when gang leader diego "gunz" eeleas was murdered by his abused younger brother, noah "shadowz" eeleas. the year after that, gunz committed suicide. the police found a note saying, "the devil gave me a deal." it also said that yesterday, some guy got brutally murdered, like, cannibal style. this was the 13th murder that happened this month. all creeped put, i decided to go outside with my friends. before i stepped out of the house, i realized the guy who got killed yesterday was at a park real close to my house. so we went there. it was 6:30, i believe, when we got there. we had a flashlight, 5 cologne bottles, matches and lighters, 6 metal rods and crowbars and 3 shotguns we got from the junkyard. we went deep into the woods, like right beside a long, deep river. thats when i found a bloodied key chain that said, "shadowz are watching". i got terrified, and put it in my pocket. we then split up. so, i was alone, with no one beside me, and i had the feeling someone was getting gradually closer to me. in a negative way. then i heard a branch falling, with a figure coming out. i just jumped into the river onto the other side and kept running, not looking back, and it was following me. when i flashighted (<-- WTF!?) him, there was nothing. then, i heard shots fired, and something like a blade cutting through thin air. i realized someone got killed, when i saw blood streaming along the river, then i saw some meat like stuff that u see at the flee market flow down the river. it smelled so bad and looked disgusting, i started to puke. i felt dizzy, and fell down into the river. i woke up almost drowning, and realizing it was midnight, when i got under a bridge and decided to stay there for the night. thats when i saw something beside me. i pushed it over, but realizing it was my friend kenny's body. his chest to stomach was ripped open, and only his bones were on the inside. nothing else. poor kenny. good thing my parents were on a month vacation. the next day we decided to sleep over at my friend azeem's house. me and him told everyone not to use an ouija board (hard to spell). i didn't want to pick a fight with the devil. we told scary stories, and when it was eric's turn he was the scariest. he said when shadowz was a kid he was so intrigued by the devil he wanted to partners in crime with the devil. so the devil told him to give gunz to him and his dream would come true. then i realized. shadowz is back. then we heard a low pitched voice saying, " im here". we all just screamed and climbed out the window. when i looked, i saw him. those possessed eyes, those stitches, everything, i could tell it was him. then, it dissapeared. and for the next 2 weeks, we never saw him. people kept getting killed though. another 2 of my friends also got killed the same way. then, i realized that shadowz was taking people's souls. so, i decided to stop him with light, and gunz- i mean guns. i knew he was after me. i could feel sometimes my soul was kinda escaping. so the next night, i just sat in my bed, and pretended to sleep, with my friends watching over me on all corners in the room, with all of them carrying shotguns. out of nowhere, the figure appeared, and i turned the flashlight on him. my friends just kept shooting. the figure screamed, and just blew up. i knew it was over. a month after what happened, i found a note. it said, "im still after you". i felt so scared. i turned back. and there it was. that figure. i thought it was just a shadow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasu Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 I feel like shooting you and your wall of text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 "If there's a wall in our way, we'll destroy it!" I stopped taking your story seriously after I read "diego gunz eeleas". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice. Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 [quote name='Clair' timestamp='1287856181' post='4729000'] "If there's a wall in our way, we'll destroy it!" I stopped taking your story seriously after I read "diego gunz eeleas". [/quote] I stopped taking it seriously when I saw his username. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Î’yakuya Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 [img]http://blog.cold-comfort.org/wp-content/uploads/2009/09/20021223_05_mistake.gif[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 [quote name='Ice' timestamp='1287857355' post='4729064'] I stopped taking it seriously when I saw his username. [/quote] This. Most of his posts are just idiotic. But seriously, learn to use Paragraphs it hurts peoples eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 So, does nobody here have plans get on-topic anytime soon? Because I, for one, would like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I-dreezyAFG Posted October 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 i know. i felt too tired to do that, i'll do it now. now enough of my story, i wanna hear ur stories people! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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