lewis atherton Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 I have edited these cards once please leave fair and honest feedback [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/1451/303169x.jpg[/img] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/9065/303169.jpg[/img] [img]http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/9065/303169.jpg[/img] [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/1258/303169ot.jpg[/img] [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/1277/303169h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/6481/303169ao.jpg[/img] [img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/9112/303169px.jpg[/img] [img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/6268/303169l.jpg[/img] [img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/3733/303169e.jpg[/img] [img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/815/303169u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/2638/303169lk.jpg[/img] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/5529/303169a.jpg[/img] [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/815/303169u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/7205/303169df.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 good cards. the first 2 say dark witch. its generally better to post the cards effect beneath it because some of the cards mess up in loading so i cant read several effects. a few ocg errors. never write numbers, just hit 2 Special Summon should be capped, as should Deck, Hand, Graveyard and suchforth. a couple of them are a little op cherry being by far the most. the way its worded you can just use her in a regular not Noir Witch deck ans SS her. all around not a bad set at all. tho it is also more advisable to post cards one at a time until you perfect both them and your technique. this prevents massive editing. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lewis atherton Posted October 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 ok thank you i will edit it now i appreiate the comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted October 23, 2010 Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 Alright, man. These cards look like they've got solid effects. However, the OCG, grammar and spelling is so bad here it's genuinely painful to read them. Fix that first. However, I CAN tell from Sherbet's effect that she's (probably unintentionally) broken, since she just says you can "destroy a Spell and Trap" if you control a Noir monster. Since it doesn't have a "Once Per Turn" limit or any sort of cost, that's a free S/T clear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lewis atherton Posted October 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2010 noir which strawberry - if their [u][b]are[/b][/u] no "noir witch" monsters on your star of the field.sherbert - once per turn also spell or trap!!! sorry about my shocking spelling and grammer... -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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