BLEACH!!

[I'm Yu]

Okay, so I'm wiping this post and my later post and posting all of my cards here as of 20:15 pm GMT. Hope you guys like them!

[Spoiler=Captains][img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/7470/304157e.jpg[/img] [img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/7840/304157d.jpg[/img] [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/6121/304157s.jpg[/img] [img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/4817/304157.jpg[/img] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/4081/304157v.jpg[/img] [img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/3278/304157w.jpg[/img] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/4817/304157.jpg[/img]
[Spoiler=Lore]
Squad 1-This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 2 cards on your field that have the word 'Captain' in their name.
When this card is successfully summoned, you may special summon 1 Warrior-type monster from your hand or deck with the word 'Captain' in it's name to your field in Face-Up Attack Position. This card cannot attack on the turn it is summoned.
When this card destroys a monster in Defence Position, the difference between this cards Attack Points and the destroyed monsters Defence Points is dealt to your opponent as Battle Damage.

Squad 2-When this card is successfully Summoned, you may Special Summon 1 'Squad 2-Lieutenant Marechiyo Omaeda' from your hand or deck to the field in Face-Up Attack Position.
During your opponents Battle Phase, you can negate 1 attack that targets this card and destroy the attacking monster. If this effect is used, this card cannot attack during your next turn.

Squad 4-When this card is successfully summoned, you may Special Summon 1 'Squad 4-Lieutenant Isane Kotetsu' from your hand or deck to the field in face up Attack Position. Once per turn, if this card is on your side of the field. you can discard 1 card from your hand to increase your Life Points by 1000.

Squad 6-When this card is successfully Summoned, you may Special Summon 1 'Squad 6-Lieutenant Renji Abarai' from your deck to the field in Face-Up Attack Position.
Once per turn, you may discard 1 card from your hand to allow this card to deal damage to your opponents Life Points equal to half of this cards original Attack Points. This card cannot attack the on turn this effect is activated.

Squad 10-When this card is successfully summoned, you may Special Summon 1 'Squad 10-Lieutenant Rangiku Matsumoto' from your hand or deck in Face-Up Attack Position. If this card is in Attack Position on your field during your Main Phase 1, you can discard 1 card to destroy one card on your opponents field once per turn. During the turn this effect is activated, this card cannot attack.

Squad 11-This card cannot be destroyed in battle. When this card is successfully Summoned, you may special summon one 'Squad 11-Lieutenant Yachiru Kusajishi' from your deck or hand in Face-Up Attack Position. Once per turn, you can discard one from card from your hand to increase this cards Attack Points by 1000 for the duration of the turn.

Squad 12-When this card is successfully Summoned to the field, you may Special Summon 1 'Squad 12-Lieutenant Nemu Kurotsuchi' from your hand or deck to the field in Face-Up Attack Position.
Once per turn, this card can cut the Attack Points of one monster your opponent controls in half for the duration of the turn. If this effect is activated, this card cannot attack that turn.
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[Spoiler=Movie][img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/4817/304157.jpg[/img] [img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/3278/304157w.jpg[/img][/Spoiler]

[Spoiler=Spell/Trap][img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/4817/304157.jpg[/img][/Spoiler]

[Syrup Ultimatum]

LOLZ!! I have trouble understanding how you remember all of this junk! Those names are so confusing! But they're really good cards. Ther really balanced compared to most, too. Keep up the good work!


LONG LIVE THE FIVE ASPECTS!!!
[img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/3522/181953.jpg[/img][img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/4324/181953h.jpg[/img]

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

Nice cards, but there are some issues.

For Kenpachi, you can discard a card to get a 5000 attack beater. Not a good idea, lvl 8s don't go that high on their own. I'd suggest just a small attack increase, maybe 500, 1000 might be pushing it.
Also, "one" should be "1", "him" should be "this card", and "(special) summoned" should be "(Special) Summoned".

For Hitsugaya, same OCG corrections as above, and the last effect can just say "Once per turn," before it instead of using the last sentence.

Unohana needs the same correction, and "life points" should be capitalized.

Only other thing I have to say is that all the cards these guys can special summon can't be too powerful, it'd not very good if you're able to bring out a game winning card for no cost.

Can't get an accurate rating without seeing those last 3 cards these guys bring out, so I'll wait for them for the rate.

[WolfFan16]

I must say im impressed. this is pretty good and for your first post? thats amazing. there are people with hundreds who make lower quality stuff. small OCG errors (^look at that post by metagross386^) Last image could use work.

[Raine]

Kenpachi can be very OP cut the attack boost to maybe a 1000
Hitsugaya is not nearly as bad but it shouldn't need to much alteration
Otherwise good pics (except the 3rd one) and mess with the OCG
7/10

[I'm Yu]

[quote name='Metagross386' timestamp='1287883872' post='4730350']
Nice cards, but there are some issues.

For Kenpachi, you can discard a card to get a 5000 attack beater. Not a good idea, lvl 8s don't go that high on their own. I'd suggest just a small attack increase, maybe 500, 1000 might be pushing it.
Also, "one" should be "1", "him" should be "this card", and "(special) summoned" should be "(Special) Summoned".

For Hitsugaya, same OCG corrections as above, and the last effect can just say "Once per turn," before it instead of using the last sentence.

Unohana needs the same correction, and "life points" should be capitalized.

Only other thing I have to say is that all the cards these guys can special summon can't be too powerful, it'd not very good if you're able to bring out a game winning card for no cost.

Can't get an accurate rating without seeing those last 3 cards these guys bring out, so I'll wait for them for the rate.
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[quote name='WolfFan16' timestamp='1287893772' post='4730814']
I must say im impressed. this is pretty good and for your first post? thats amazing. there are people with hundreds who make lower quality stuff. small OCG errors (^look at that post by metagross386^) Last image could use work.
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[quote name='GrandRaine' timestamp='1287896426' post='4730977']
Kenpachi can be very OP cut the attack boost to maybe a 1000
Hitsugaya is not nearly as bad but it shouldn't need to much alteration
Otherwise good pics (except the 3rd one) and mess with the OCG
7/10
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Thanks for the opinions.
Regarding the Lieutenants, I'm considering simply leaving them as normal monsters (except for a couple that I have an idea for) with stats similar to...a card whose name I can't remember, but it'll be close to that. I'll pretty much keep the effects limited to Captains and maybe a few others...
Regarding Kenpachi, I will keep that in mind. I just instantly thought that when I remembered how BAT SH*T STRONG he got when he took of the patch! But looking back, it does overpower him a bit. I'll fix that.
I'll sort out Toshiro's card as well and as for Unohana, I know the image wasn't the best but half the other images I got from google were either Hentai (for reasons I don't wanna know) and images that had The Bleach logo or something similar, which I don't want in the image. If anyone finds a good image I can use, please post a link here. I'll try and find a better one in the mean time. If I have to, I'll use an image from the Manga, but it wouldn't look as good I think.

Again, thanks for the opinions guys, and I'll sort those changes out

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

Kanpachi is much more balanced that way, but there are still some capitalization errors I put in my first post that you missed. Unohana's pic style seems off to me, but it's better than the first since it doesn't have a plain white background.

Also, just noticed that your cards are Shinigami-Type, we usually try not to use fake types here, just makes things a lot more confusing. Try changing them to something like warrior.

Yachiru's second pic is better because it doesn't have the words in the pic. Also, whenever you use a pic, make sure to crop it into a square before uploading it, makes the picture look a lot less squashed.

Last thing about the cards, for the Lieutenents, they can have some decent effects, it's just that, since they get brought out for free by the other guys, you should probably give them the restriction of "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of 'Insert Monster Here'".

Last bit of info, instead of making a brand new post for your cards, you can just edit your first post with the button at the bottom of it. Very good cards for a new member. Hope to see more in the future.

[I'm Yu]

[quote name='Metagross386' timestamp='1287925757' post='4731662']
Kanpachi is much more balanced that way, but there are still some capitalization errors I put in my first post that you missed. Unohana's pic style seems off to me, but it's better than the first since it doesn't have a plain white background.

Also, just noticed that your cards are Shinigami-Type, we usually try not to use fake types here, just makes things a lot more confusing. Try changing them to something like warrior.

Yachiru's second pic is better because it doesn't have the words in the pic. Also, whenever you use a pic, make sure to crop it into a square before uploading it, makes the picture look a lot less squashed.

Last thing about the cards, for the Lieutenents, they can have some decent effects, it's just that, since they get brought out for free by the other guys, you should probably give them the restriction of "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of 'Insert Monster Here'".

Last bit of info, instead of making a brand new post for your cards, you can just edit your first post with the button at the bottom of it. Very good cards for a new member. Hope to see more in the future.
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Right, I'll go back and fix the mistakes on my cards now. And for Unohana, the image used is fanart I believe, so it will look off compared to the others until I can find another decent image that I can actually use.
Didn't know that, i'll change the types to warrior.
The Lieutenants don't always fight with just their captain, but will answer their summons, hence the captain's effects. But I worded that so it says 'MAY', meaning you can if you want, but it's not a compulsory effect like it is with some cards. (and I just noticed I didn't do that with Toshiro...whoops. Another thing to fix).
I'll keep that in mind with my future posts. Glad you like the cards and hopefully I'll have more of them done soon, hopefully with less mistakes as well!

[I'm Yu]

Okay-I need a little help-anyone know where I can find a decent image for Isane Kotetsu? Looking online I found some ok ones, but they looked squashed and not as good on the card.
Anyone know where I could look for a decent image?

[I'm Yu]

Okay, all my cards are now in my 1st post, along with a couple of others that were (unintentionally) inspired by Metagross386, so thank you for that.
Let me know what you guys think and I'll try and get more on the way!

[El Pirato]

When I make my BLEACH based cards I use names I imagined Takahashi Kazuki using

here are some examples of an evolutionary series I'm making
[img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/5676/298442.jpg[/img] [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/9826/298442w.jpg[/img] [img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/5676/298442.jpg[/img]

[I'm Yu]

[quote name='El Pirato' timestamp='1287948444' post='4732776']
When I make my BLEACH based cards I use names I imagined Takahashi Kazuki using

here are some examples of an evolutionary series I'm making
[img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/5676/298442.jpg[/img] [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/9826/298442w.jpg[/img] [img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/5676/298442.jpg[/img]
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Wow...now those, I really like the look of. I wasn't sure how to pull of Aizen and the other traitors to Soul Society, but I like the look of those. Nice job. You have any plans for the Hogyoku card yet?

[El Pirato]

[quote name='I'm Yu' timestamp='1287948968' post='4732807']
Wow...now those, I really like the look of. I wasn't sure how to pull of Aizen and the other traitors to Soul Society, but I like the look of those. Nice job. You have any plans for the Hogyoku card yet?
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I plan on making Hogyoku a Field Equip Spellcard

and what are your plans for the Zanpakuto(weapons)

[I'm Yu]

Sounds interesting-I look forward to seeing your card when it comes out!

[El Pirato]

[quote name='I'm Yu' timestamp='1287949632' post='4732852']
Sounds interesting-I look forward to seeing your card when it comes out!
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You mean this?

[img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/5676/298442.jpg[/img]

for the final stage:
[img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/5676/298442.jpg[/img]

[I'm Yu]

ooh...I like it. Nice job. Out of curiosity, you plan on creating a card for Aizen's Final form as well? Or are you leaving it at the chrysalis stage?

[El Pirato]

[quote name='I'm Yu' timestamp='1287951609' post='4732961']
ooh...I like it. Nice job. Out of curiosity, you plan on creating a card for Aizen's Final form as well? Or are you leaving it at the chrysalis stage?
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final bit is up

[I'm Yu]

AWESOME!! (Reads card effects)...Butterfly Robe?

[El Pirato]

Here is the whole set:

[img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/5676/298442.jpg[/img] [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/5676/298442.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/5676/298442.jpg[/img] [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/5676/298442.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/7531/298442f.jpg[/img] [img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/5676/298442.jpg[/img]

[img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/5676/298442.jpg[/img]

[I'm Yu]

There we go...wow. These cards look awesome!

[I'm Yu]

Okay-Captain and Lieutenant for squad 2 is up. Still having trouble finding a good image for Isane Kotetsu, so if anyone can help with that I'd really appreciate it.

Also, someone mind telling me how you do the thing where you click the link to reveal the cards? It may make things look better and I can put lores in with them as well!

[I'm Yu]

And Squad 6 captain and lieutenant are up, along with the lieutenant of squad 4 (FINALLY).

I have a couple of spells sorted, but I'll put them up later when I have more cards done. Please, let me know what you guys think of my cards so far!

[I'm Yu]

And I have another couple cards posted up for you all. If you want to read the effects for my Captains, they can now be found with the images for my Captain Cards.

Please, let me know what you guys think of them.