Ritual Monster and Spell

[GundamFreedom]

This is my second time making a ritual monster and a ritual spell card. I hope I didn't do bad on them. Please check for mistake on them. It would be appreciative. Also rate on them how well they are.
[img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/636/115644.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore]This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Abyss Chaos". Once per turn, you can Tribute all other monsters you control to destroy a number of cards your opponent controls equal to the number of the monsters you Tributed. This card cannot declare an attack during the same turn you activate this effect.[/spoiler]
[img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/636/115644.jpg[/img]

[GundamFreedom]

Can anyone fix the OCG on them and rate how good they are? bump.

[Sweetie Belle]

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Abyss Chaos". [b]You can Tribute all other monsters you control to[/b] destroy [b]a number of[/b] cards [b]your opponent controls[/b] [b]equal[/b] to the number of the monsters [b]you T[/b]ributed. [b]T[/b]his card cannot [b]declare an[/b] attack [b]during the same turn you activate this effect[/b].

With a certain card, Samsara Lotus, I think, this card could easily clear your opponent's field (of monsters). I think you should add a "Once per turn," at the beginning of the effect.


OCG: 2/5
Balance: 3/5
Aesthetics: 3.5/5
Usefulness: 4/5

Total: 12.5/20

[GundamFreedom]

Ok. Thanks with the help.

[GundamFreedom]

bump

[GundamFreedom]

Anyone else?

[jaster_rogue]

I'm sorry I'm not good with OCG, but I think it's good, very nice pic (I both cards) I liked it a lot 9/10, specially cuz I like Ritual cards