auqablue967 Posted October 24, 2010 Report Share Posted October 24, 2010 Herro gaiz~ this is my first post, I found out about this site through-*COUGHS*- Yu-Gi-Oh Abridged XD.+Rep me, though I have no idea how it works. The cards I created are the "Frost Legends" and "Flame Revelation" cards. I was thinking of making a "Dual Element" set, where two monsters from the different sets are fused. Anyways, enjoy, and leave comments or suggestions. NOTE: I do not own any pictures, credit goes to all of the original artists. THANKS SKizophrenIK117!!! [center][color="#000000"][size="5"][font="Century Gothic"][u][b]BOOSTER PACKS[/b][/u][/font][/size][/color][/center] [center][img]http://oi52.tinypic.com/2z8wal4.jpg[/img] [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/s5gysi.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/2rroxav.jpg[/IMG][/center] [b]FROST LEGENDS:[/b] [spoiler=Monsters] [img]http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/7478/303937r.jpg[/img] [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/829/303937.jpg[/img] [img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/9031/303937y.jpg[/img] [img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/829/303937.jpg[/img] [img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/9656/303937b.jpg[/img] [img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/1065/303937q.jpg[/img] [img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/829/303937.jpg[/img] [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/829/303937.jpg[/img] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/829/303937.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells] [img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/6076/303937o.jpg[/img] [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/829/303937.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [b]FLAME REVELATION:[/b] [spoiler=Monsters][img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/829/303937.jpg[/img] [img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/3508/303937g.jpg[/img] [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/6161/303937h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/7199/303937j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/1983/303937l.jpg[/img] [img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/7478/303937r.jpg[/img] [img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/7478/303937r.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells][img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/7478/303937r.jpg[/img] [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/3544/303937k.jpg[/img] [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/9031/303937y.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [b]DUAL ELEMENT:[/b] [spoiler=Monsters][img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/829/303937.jpg[/img] [img]http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/2357/303937t.jpg[/img] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/829/303937.jpg[/img] [img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/5601/303937wd.jpg[/img] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/5894/303937m.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells][img]http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/829/303937.jpg[/img] [img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/6894/303937c.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted October 24, 2010 Report Share Posted October 24, 2010 I think there's something wrong with your card... The best way of posting a card is to (while on the Card Maker) click on the finished card, and copy-paste the [IMG] code into your topic. Might make it a bit more... viewable? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
auqablue967 Posted October 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2010 [quote name='SKizophrenIK117' timestamp='1287964618' post='4733785'] I think there's something wrong with your card... The best way of posting a card is to (while on the Card Maker) click on the finished card, and copy-paste the [IMG] code into your topic. Might make it a bit more... viewable? [/quote] Yeah, im working on it right now, that was a test. Thanks for feedback! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 [quote name='auqablue967' timestamp='1287964731' post='4733791'] Yeah, im working on it right now, that was a test. Thanks for feedback! [/quote] Np, glad to help. Seems like a quite unusual Ritual card. Certainly does the job and I like the idea. Only things I can point out are a space in between "field(excluding)", and clarify what Spell cards must be discarded. Face-up, I imagine but it probably ought to be added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
auqablue967 Posted October 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 [quote name='SKizophrenIK117' timestamp='1287964883' post='4733799'] Np, glad to help. Seems like a quite unusual Ritual card. Certainly does the job and I like the idea. Only things I can point out are a space in between "field(excluding)", and clarify what Spell cards must be discarded. Face-up, I imagine but it probably ought to be added. [/quote] I changed it and added my other cards. Lol thanks!Bump? Iono how this works o-o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 I suppose I can have a look at the rest as well. [b]Frost Legends[/b] The Archer - Seems like a very simple Normal Monster, almost reminds me of Mr. Volcano (one of my favourites ). Nothing particularly special, nothing particularly bad either. Maybe a little weak by today's standards. I think you could shave off 100 or so ATK + DEF and make it a Level 4. The Battle Mage - Good beatstick. For OCG, I'd suggest you push the effect down a line first. Also, [b]G[/b]raveyard and [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints need capitals. Noticed Frost Fusion's effect but I'm never too sure paying half of your LP is a great idea, I think a set amount will be more practical. Could need a support ability for if you're running low on LP for the position shift. (Or high if you plan on keeping the same paid LP). The Dragon - Seems fine - probably the best balanced and realistic so far. Nice ability just an OCG fix this time. "When this card is successfully Normal Summoned (or Tribute, not sure. Pick your favourite), you can add 1 "Frost Legends-The Knight" from your Deck (or Graveyard or both, again pick what you prefer) to your Hand. The Dragon Rider - Lol, Siegfried from Soulcalibur 4. Pic could be better, backgrounds help. Effect seems fine but I think he should be Lv.9 to keep it in check. Recommend you capitalize Deck and change one to 1 for all cards. (Looks a bit more professional) The Ice Cube - Lol again. Can't sugercoat it, needs to change. Pic's gotta go and the name'll probably change with it. Effect seems fine. Change from Level 12 to 10/9. The Knight - Again looks OK for a Normal Monster, but could probably use a slight ATK boost (300 at the most) to keep it competitive. The Wolf - Another OK Vanilla, could use a better picture. I think I saw one on Deviantart - Ice Wolf (if you feel like looking.) (Starting to get an Elemental Hero feel here...) The Sorceror - Is overpowered. I suggest that you limit the ATK boost to 200/300. The Wolf Knight - Looks ace. All seems good to me. For OCG capitalize 1st Graveyard and Hand and it's done. Should probably be Lv.8. Frost Fusion - Seems okay but still on the E-Hero lines. Not the most original, but practical for the Archetype. For OCG, "defence position" needs it capitals. Cold Ritual - Already posted on it. [b]Flame Revelation [/b] The Knight - Another basic Vanilla. A couple of support effects for all these Normal's wouldn't hurt. The Sorceror - Could also do with a small attack boost to put him on par with other good Lv 6's. Whew. All done. I'll be watching for new cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
auqablue967 Posted October 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 [quote name='SKizophrenIK117' timestamp='1287968338' post='4734061'] I suppose I can have a look at the rest as well. [b]Frost Legends[/b] The Archer - Seems like a very simple Normal Monster, almost reminds me of Mr. Volcano (one of my favourites ). Nothing particularly special, nothing particularly bad either. Maybe a little weak by today's standards. I think you could shave off 100 or so ATK + DEF and make it a Level 4. The Battle Mage - Good beatstick. For OCG, I'd suggest you push the effect down a line first. Also, [b]G[/b]raveyard and [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints need capitals. Noticed Frost Fusion's effect but I'm never too sure paying half of your LP is a great idea, I think a set amount will be more practical. Could need a support ability for if you're running low on LP for the position shift. (Or high if you plan on keeping the same paid LP). The Dragon - Seems fine - probably the best balanced and realistic so far. Nice ability just an OCG fix this time. "When this card is successfully Normal Summoned (or Tribute, not sure. Pick your favourite), you can add 1 "Frost Legends-The Knight" from your Deck (or Graveyard or both, again pick what you prefer) to your Hand. The Dragon Rider - Lol, Siegfried from Soulcalibur 4. Pic could be better, backgrounds help. Effect seems fine but I think he should be Lv.9 to keep it in check. Recommend you capitalize Deck and change one to 1 for all cards. (Looks a bit more professional) The Ice Cube - Lol again. Can't sugercoat it, needs to change. Pic's gotta go and the name'll probably change with it. Effect seems fine. Change from Level 12 to 10/9. The Knight - Again looks OK for a Normal Monster, but could probably use a slight ATK boost (300 at the most) to keep it competitive. The Wolf - Another OK Vanilla, could use a better picture. I think I saw one on Deviantart - Ice Wolf (if you feel like looking.) (Starting to get an Elemental Hero feel here...) The Sorceror - Is overpowered. I suggest that you limit the ATK boost to 200/300. The Wolf Knight - Looks ace. All seems good to me. For OCG capitalize 1st Graveyard and Hand and it's done. Should probably be Lv.8. Frost Fusion - Seems okay but still on the E-Hero lines. Not the most original, but practical for the Archetype. For OCG, "defence position" needs it capitals. Cold Ritual - Already posted on it. [b]Flame Revelation [/b] The Knight - Another basic Vanilla. A couple of support effects for all these Normal's wouldn't hurt. The Sorceror - Could also do with a small attack boost to put him on par with other good Lv 6's. Whew. All done. I'll be watching for new cards. [/quote] Wow! Thanks for the effort! I'll be working on it, I probably won't finish today, I'm doing my homework at the same time lol. I'll get back to you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
auqablue967 Posted October 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 [quote name='SKizophrenIK117' timestamp='1287968338' post='4734061'] I suppose I can have a look at the rest as well. [b]Frost Legends[/b] The Archer - Seems like a very simple Normal Monster, almost reminds me of Mr. Volcano (one of my favourites ). Nothing particularly special, nothing particularly bad either. Maybe a little weak by today's standards. I think you could shave off 100 or so ATK + DEF and make it a Level 4. The Battle Mage - Good beatstick. For OCG, I'd suggest you push the effect down a line first. Also, [b]G[/b]raveyard and [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints need capitals. Noticed Frost Fusion's effect but I'm never too sure paying half of your LP is a great idea, I think a set amount will be more practical. Could need a support ability for if you're running low on LP for the position shift. (Or high if you plan on keeping the same paid LP). The Dragon - Seems fine - probably the best balanced and realistic so far. Nice ability just an OCG fix this time. "When this card is successfully Normal Summoned (or Tribute, not sure. Pick your favourite), you can add 1 "Frost Legends-The Knight" from your Deck (or Graveyard or both, again pick what you prefer) to your Hand. The Dragon Rider - Lol, Siegfried from Soulcalibur 4. Pic could be better, backgrounds help. Effect seems fine but I think he should be Lv.9 to keep it in check. Recommend you capitalize Deck and change one to 1 for all cards. (Looks a bit more professional) The Ice Cube - Lol again. Can't sugercoat it, needs to change. Pic's gotta go and the name'll probably change with it. Effect seems fine. Change from Level 12 to 10/9. The Knight - Again looks OK for a Normal Monster, but could probably use a slight ATK boost (300 at the most) to keep it competitive. The Wolf - Another OK Vanilla, could use a better picture. I think I saw one on Deviantart - Ice Wolf (if you feel like looking.) (Starting to get an Elemental Hero feel here...) The Sorceror - Is overpowered. I suggest that you limit the ATK boost to 200/300. The Wolf Knight - Looks ace. All seems good to me. For OCG capitalize 1st Graveyard and Hand and it's done. Should probably be Lv.8. Frost Fusion - Seems okay but still on the E-Hero lines. Not the most original, but practical for the Archetype. For OCG, "defence position" needs it capitals. Cold Ritual - Already posted on it. [b]Flame Revelation [/b] The Knight - Another basic Vanilla. A couple of support effects for all these Normal's wouldn't hurt. The Sorceror - Could also do with a small attack boost to put him on par with other good Lv 6's. Whew. All done. I'll be watching for new cards. [/quote] I'm done! Check it out, I'll be working on Flame Revelation Cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 They're starting to look pretty good, loving the Ice King. Let me know when you add more cards, I want a front row seat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
auqablue967 Posted October 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 [quote name='SKizophrenIK117' timestamp='1287973109' post='4734420'] They're starting to look pretty good, loving the Ice King. Let me know when you add more cards, I want a front row seat. [/quote] Did you check out the Flame Revelation cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
auqablue967 Posted October 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 Bump? LOL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
auqablue967 Posted October 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 [quote name='SKizophrenIK117' timestamp='1287968338' post='4734061'] I suppose I can have a look at the rest as well. [b]Frost Legends[/b] The Archer - Seems like a very simple Normal Monster, almost reminds me of Mr. Volcano (one of my favourites ). Nothing particularly special, nothing particularly bad either. Maybe a little weak by today's standards. I think you could shave off 100 or so ATK + DEF and make it a Level 4. The Battle Mage - Good beatstick. For OCG, I'd suggest you push the effect down a line first. Also, [b]G[/b]raveyard and [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints need capitals. Noticed Frost Fusion's effect but I'm never too sure paying half of your LP is a great idea, I think a set amount will be more practical. Could need a support ability for if you're running low on LP for the position shift. (Or high if you plan on keeping the same paid LP). The Dragon - Seems fine - probably the best balanced and realistic so far. Nice ability just an OCG fix this time. "When this card is successfully Normal Summoned (or Tribute, not sure. Pick your favourite), you can add 1 "Frost Legends-The Knight" from your Deck (or Graveyard or both, again pick what you prefer) to your Hand. The Dragon Rider - Lol, Siegfried from Soulcalibur 4. Pic could be better, backgrounds help. Effect seems fine but I think he should be Lv.9 to keep it in check. Recommend you capitalize Deck and change one to 1 for all cards. (Looks a bit more professional) The Ice Cube - Lol again. Can't sugercoat it, needs to change. Pic's gotta go and the name'll probably change with it. Effect seems fine. Change from Level 12 to 10/9. The Knight - Again looks OK for a Normal Monster, but could probably use a slight ATK boost (300 at the most) to keep it competitive. The Wolf - Another OK Vanilla, could use a better picture. I think I saw one on Deviantart - Ice Wolf (if you feel like looking.) (Starting to get an Elemental Hero feel here...) The Sorceror - Is overpowered. I suggest that you limit the ATK boost to 200/300. The Wolf Knight - Looks ace. All seems good to me. For OCG capitalize 1st Graveyard and Hand and it's done. Should probably be Lv.8. Frost Fusion - Seems okay but still on the E-Hero lines. Not the most original, but practical for the Archetype. For OCG, "defence position" needs it capitals. Cold Ritual - Already posted on it. [b]Flame Revelation [/b] The Knight - Another basic Vanilla. A couple of support effects for all these Normal's wouldn't hurt. The Sorceror - Could also do with a small attack boost to put him on par with other good Lv 6's. Whew. All done. I'll be watching for new cards. [/quote] What's a vanilla? o-o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
auqablue967 Posted October 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 [quote name='SKizophrenIK117' timestamp='1287968338' post='4734061'] I suppose I can have a look at the rest as well. [b]Frost Legends[/b] The Archer - Seems like a very simple Normal Monster, almost reminds me of Mr. Volcano (one of my favourites ). Nothing particularly special, nothing particularly bad either. Maybe a little weak by today's standards. I think you could shave off 100 or so ATK + DEF and make it a Level 4. The Battle Mage - Good beatstick. For OCG, I'd suggest you push the effect down a line first. Also, [b]G[/b]raveyard and [b]L[/b]ife [b]P[/b]oints need capitals. Noticed Frost Fusion's effect but I'm never too sure paying half of your LP is a great idea, I think a set amount will be more practical. Could need a support ability for if you're running low on LP for the position shift. (Or high if you plan on keeping the same paid LP). The Dragon - Seems fine - probably the best balanced and realistic so far. Nice ability just an OCG fix this time. "When this card is successfully Normal Summoned (or Tribute, not sure. Pick your favourite), you can add 1 "Frost Legends-The Knight" from your Deck (or Graveyard or both, again pick what you prefer) to your Hand. The Dragon Rider - Lol, Siegfried from Soulcalibur 4. Pic could be better, backgrounds help. Effect seems fine but I think he should be Lv.9 to keep it in check. Recommend you capitalize Deck and change one to 1 for all cards. (Looks a bit more professional) The Ice Cube - Lol again. Can't sugercoat it, needs to change. Pic's gotta go and the name'll probably change with it. Effect seems fine. Change from Level 12 to 10/9. The Knight - Again looks OK for a Normal Monster, but could probably use a slight ATK boost (300 at the most) to keep it competitive. The Wolf - Another OK Vanilla, could use a better picture. I think I saw one on Deviantart - Ice Wolf (if you feel like looking.) (Starting to get an Elemental Hero feel here...) The Sorceror - Is overpowered. I suggest that you limit the ATK boost to 200/300. The Wolf Knight - Looks ace. All seems good to me. For OCG capitalize 1st Graveyard and Hand and it's done. Should probably be Lv.8. Frost Fusion - Seems okay but still on the E-Hero lines. Not the most original, but practical for the Archetype. For OCG, "defence position" needs it capitals. Cold Ritual - Already posted on it. [b]Flame Revelation [/b] The Knight - Another basic Vanilla. A couple of support effects for all these Normal's wouldn't hurt. The Sorceror - Could also do with a small attack boost to put him on par with other good Lv 6's. Whew. All done. I'll be watching for new cards. [/quote] What's a vanilla? o-o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted October 26, 2010 Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 Vanilla is just another term for a Normal Monster. On this site the majority would rather see effects with card so I imagine they would have a lot to say about how many of them there are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
auqablue967 Posted October 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 [quote name='SKizophrenIK117' timestamp='1288091237' post='4738599'] Vanilla is just another term for a Normal Monster. On this site the majority would rather see effects with card so I imagine they would have a lot to say about how many of them there are. [/quote] Do you like the new cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted October 26, 2010 Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 I'll try and give you another full review when I wake up, if I checked 'em now, I'd probably do a crappy job. Just give me 9 or so hours sleep time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
auqablue967 Posted October 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 [quote name='SKizophrenIK117' timestamp='1288137546' post='4740400'] I'll try and give you another full review when I wake up, if I checked 'em now, I'd probably do a crappy job. Just give me 9 or so hours sleep time. [/quote] What time zone are you? o-o [quote name='SKizophrenIK117' timestamp='1288137546' post='4740400'] I'll try and give you another full review when I wake up, if I checked 'em now, I'd probably do a crappy job. Just give me 9 or so hours sleep time. [/quote] I guess I'm done with this set, I can't think of anything else to add. I will add periodically, as people add suggestions. I will probably keep adding, keep checking back. I'll probably add another set sometime during the next few days. I'll PM you the link to my new set if I make one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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