A new card for machine based decks

[Da kid FAT]

These are my cards I made them cos I have a machine deck hope u like them. plz comment and rate.

[Spoiler= Carnivorous Artillery][img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/7466/100060d.jpg[/img]
Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing three machine type monsters from your graveyard and/or side of the field from play. When this card is special summoned add one 'carnivorous ammunition' to your hand. This card cannot declare an attack unless you have equipped 'carnivorous ammunition' [/spoiler]

[spoiler= Carnivorous Ammunition][img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/8103/100060p.jpg[/img]
Lore: This card can only be equipped to Carnivorous Artillery. Place one counter on this card for every card you remove on your side of the field from play. If you destroy four counters the equipped card can then declare an attack this turn. [/spoiler]

[Jaime Duferier]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing three machine type monsters from your graveyard/side of the field from play. This card cannot declare an attack unless you have equipped the card carnivorous ammunition to it.

[Da kid FAT]

thanks help appreciated

[Phantom M.C.]

Carnivorous Artillery: changes in [b]bold[/b]
Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing [b]3[/b] [b]Machine-Type[/b] monsters from your [b]Graveyard and/or side of the field[/b] from play. This card cannot declare an attack unless [b]it is equipped with "Carnivorous Ammunition".[/b]

Ammunition:
Lore: This card can only be equipped to Carnivorous Artillery. [b]Place 1 Counter on this card for each of your removed from play card.[/b] If you destroy four tokens the equipped card can then declare an attack this turn.

^^makes no sense, first counters and then tokens?

and most likely Artillery will just end up as a 4100 atk body if you don't draw Ammunition in time. and the atk is a too high, if you do happen to draw Ammunition, use limiter removal and you've got a easy to summon 8200 atk beatstick. 6/10 keep working on it

[Da kid FAT]

thanks for the help ocg errors fixed

[Mid-Knight]

Great cards, as a fellow machine-er my self, may say I these cards are bloody ace!

[Da kid FAT]

thanks for the comment its always appreciated

[Da kid FAT]

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