DannyGirl Posted October 25, 2010 Report Share Posted October 25, 2010 I tried my best guys hope you like it [img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/6887/304003k.jpg[/img] This card can declare 1 attack for each monster(s) your opponent controls. When this card battles with your opponent's monster, after damage calculation you can send both monster to the graveyard and deal 1000 Life Point damage to each player.This monster is sent to the graveyard on the End Phase of the turn it was special summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DannyGirl Posted October 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forteller Posted October 26, 2010 Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 hmmmm different, i give you a review with Cnc later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DannyGirl Posted October 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2010 2nd page bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
â™ >:Stick-Man:<â™ Posted October 27, 2010 Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 OCG Fix: This card can declare an attack once on each monster your opponent controls. When this monster declares an attack, you can send this card and the attack target to the owner's Graveyards to inflict 1000 Damage on both players. This monster is sent to the Graveyard on the End Phase of the turn it was Successfully Summoned. I don't quite get the effect myself, bot sounds a little risky, which i like. Besides that the picture is great. 8' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DannyGirl Posted October 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 thanks dude how don't u get the effect its like dd warrior lady the attack and you sent them both to the grave both players take 1000 damage but anyway does anyone think that i should make it so its only destroyed on the end phase of the turn it is special summoned like the god cards?? it would make it more splashable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetie Belle Posted October 27, 2010 Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 Multiple cases of premature bumping... Others will say "Since you're new/I'm nice so I won't report it." I'm not "others." ~Reported. ~SleepinKirby Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DannyGirl Posted October 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 first off your comment is kinda spam and i havent broken any rules u bump every 12 hours when ur bumping from the second page or higher this was on the second page and i hadnt even got a comment yet both time i bumped it so yeah.... thanks for reporting though maybe ill get some more comments and thanks for trying to be a commented memeber who is responsiible to making sure the rules r followed and done so properly ima friend you now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetie Belle Posted October 27, 2010 Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 First Bump: Three hours after the page was posted Second Bump: A little less than three hours after first bump Third Bump: Is actually okay. Two cases. Technically, still multiple. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forteller Posted October 27, 2010 Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 lol im on my phone so i wont do it now but later i will explain how you both have broken the rules with your post anyway i told dan i would comment so here it is i wont ocg against you since your new and im not good at it myself the card is preety good alot better than your first which is to be expected but this card is up'ed to me cause its a one tribute monster that will only last you a turnok here it is Dan you were preme reporting 24 hour Between bumps or 12 hour if its on the second page Kirby next time just report because as dan said your comment is actually spam lol cuz its not commenting on the card Dan go read D.D Warrior lady OCG plz it might help oh and 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DannyGirl Posted October 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 thxs forteller updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DannyGirl Posted October 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DannyGirl Posted October 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted October 28, 2010 Report Share Posted October 28, 2010 The fact that "you CAN" send them to the Grave makes it OP'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
auqablue967 Posted October 28, 2010 Report Share Posted October 28, 2010 A few OCG fixes... " When this card battles with your opponent's monster, after damage calculation you can send both monster to the graveyard and deal 1000 Life Point damage to each player." I think it should be "and deal 1000 points of damage to each player's Life Points.", and the second "monster" should be monster[b]s[/b]. Graveyard should be capitalized. The "Special Summon" in the last sentence should be capitalized, so should Graveyard. Overall, I think this card has a very good idea. 1000 points of damage seems pretty stable, so I won't critique on the effect. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DannyGirl Posted November 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 ok got it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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