A new card

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Tell me what you think. Also, be serious, no spam.

[img]http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/6622/264408.jpg[/img]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 4 DARK monsters from your Graveyard. You cannot Summon other monsters on the turn this card is Summoned. Once per turn, you can discard 2 cards to Special Summon 1 "Highlander Dragon Token" (Dragon-Type/DARK/Union/Level 4/ATK 1600/DEF 1200) in face-up Attack Position to your side of the field. Once per turn you can pay 800 Life Points and Tribute 1 "Highlander Dragon Token" you control to remove from play 1 card on the field. Once per turn you can equip this card with 1 "Highlander Dragon Token" you control, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. As long as this card is equipped with a "Highlander Dragon Token", during battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.)

I'll tell you right now that this was an experiment. Rip it apart if you dislike it, but tell me how to fix it.

Hate/Rate/Comment/Critique/Etc.

[moppmoppmopp]

Like this card, hard to find ocg wrongs, an long effect I understand 9/10

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Thank you very much

[Buttercup]

I'd prefer Dark Creator- this doesn't give me pluses and it wrecks my Graveyard.

4/10 UP

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

Interesting concept.

OCG wise this doesn't look right to me: (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.) Wouldn't this card mean Azarath? It just looks wrong in fairness.

The Tribute a token to remove a card from play seems a bit random and the cost is fairly steep to be of much use. But other than that it's an inventive card.

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Well, last time I posted, my card was broken so this time I wanted to try to keep it more balanced...or at least less broken, but as you say, I believe I've overcompensated...I'll think about loosening some of the costs.

[zacharyd527]

maybe 7/10

[CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight]

i guess i will give 8.5/10 in fairness i like the image match the name and the effect seem a little random at first but it does make point of usefulness, hmm i dun think you need paying 800 and tribute a token to make 1 card to remove though. a monster tribute should be enough though and it neutral.