Abstract [Atrocity] Posted January 23, 2008 Report Share Posted January 23, 2008 OK, I got this strange idea a while ago... It involves a second graveyard, the "Factory Graveyard".It's activated by playing a "Factory Floor" Spell card,and as more monsters enter the Factory, the fartherin you can go. Here's the whole set of it. Rules for the "Factory Graveyard"The "Factory Graveyard" is put into play when you activate"Factory Floor 3 - Entrance". All Machine-Type monsters you own that go to the Graveyard are placed on top of"Factory Floor 3 - Entrance". They do not count as being in your Regular Graveyard, so "Premature Burial" and "Pot of Avarice" do not work on them. That also meansyour opponent cannot target them with whatever cardthey will use. They also use synergy to take down your opponent easily, providing another way to play. Althoughcards involving the Factory Graveyard do not say "yourfactory graveyard", they always target cards in yourFactory Graveyard and not both player's. This was dueto my fault, making these cards for a fanfic, where theywould be the only ones in the world :P [align=center]Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except from your hand when you have 10 or more different Machine-Type monsters in the "Factory Graveyard" and have activated a "Factory Floor 0 - Novaspace" in the current Duel. Negate the effects of all Monster cards your opponent controls while this card is face-up. During each End Phase, Remove from play 1 Monster from the "Factory Graveyard". When you have Removed from play 10 Monsters with this effect, you win the Duel.Effect:After activation, treat this card as the "Factory Graveyard". Whenever a Machine-Type monster you own is sent to the Graveyard, place it on top of this card. (It counts as being in the the "Factory Graveyard".) When there are 2 or more Monsters in the "Factory Graveyard" and a Monster is sent to the "Factory Graveyard", select 1 "Factory Floor 2 - Assembly Line" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard and activate it. When activated this way, it is placed below this card on the same Spell/Trap Zone as this card, and it does not count towards the Spell/Trap Zone card limit.Effect:By showing this card in your hand to your opponent, return it to the bottom of your Deck and draw 1 card. This card cannot be placed on the field, except by the effect "Factory Floor 3 - Entrance". While this card is active, your opponent cannot select a "Factory Floor 3 - Entrance" as a target for his/her Monster, Spell or Trap Cards. When there are 6 or more Monsters in the "Factory Graveyard" and a monster you control is sent to the "Factory Graveyard", you can activate 1 "Factory Floor 1 - Liquid Metal Plant" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. When activated in this way, it is placed below this card, and it does not count towards your Spell/Trap Zone card limit.Effect for Novaspace:Activate only if "Factory Floor 3 - Entrance" and "Factory Floor 2 - Assembly Line" wre both face-up on the field at the same time in the current Duel, and were destroyed at the same time. Activate 1 "Factory Floor 3 - Entrance" and a "Factory Floor 2- Assembly Line" from your Graveyard, ignoring the Activation requirements. Then, move a numbers Machine-Type Monsters from your Graveyard to the "Factory Graveyard" equal to half of the amount of Machine-Type Monsters in your Graveyard during this card's activation. *NEW ADDITION*Effect:When this card is Tribute Summoned or Special Summoned, you can destroy all Spell and Trap Cards you control. If you destroy a "Factory Floor" card with this effect, draw 1 card. When this card is sent from the Field to the Graveyard, select 1 "Factory Floor 0 - Novaspace" in your Deck and add it to your hand. You cannot activate a "Factory Floor - Novaspace" until your 3rd Main Phase after this effect is acitvated. If you move this card from the Graveyard to the "Factory Graveyard" with a card effect, select up to 3 Machine-Type monsters in the Graveyard and move them to the "Factory Graveyard".[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sythcaris Posted January 23, 2008 Report Share Posted January 23, 2008 cool cards i could see myself using those in a battle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kei-kun Posted January 23, 2008 Report Share Posted January 23, 2008 wow, these card are awesome!!! Great Job! I hope I can create a new playing style like this ^^; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkhound Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 Nice cards. 8/10. The Pictures are ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blackluster_soldier Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 awesome cards!! but some picsaren't as cool as the others but ya 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(!Death!Reborn!) Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 I like the pics,great job on makeing that setgreat! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yogiho Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 nice and great card iam get it 10/10 (lol my first 10/10) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 10/10 I like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 Awesome.I just love them.9.8/10Needs a bit more support, and you'll get a *10/10*. But not yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 very great deck but make a bit more traps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest King of Games Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 Great idea, unique effects, alhough some OCG problems/typos.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted January 24, 2008 Report Share Posted January 24, 2008 This is the best Set i've ever seen O_O 10000000000000/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted January 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 This is the best Set i've ever seen O_O 10000000000000/10 Wow, thanks :D I'm kinda out of effects right now, so I'm not planning onmaing any more anytime soon. If anyone can find betterpictures for the Laser Beam cards, Recycle Dice &Scrap Metal , i'll give them a rep for them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HORUS Posted January 25, 2008 Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 NO! YOU STOLE MY UNVOICED AND COMPLETELY UNANNOUNCED IDEA! xD nah, 'tis an awesome set. art on some is awesome, like for the first guy, Complete, and Slaughter area. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted January 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 New card added: Guardian of Novaspace.It's to make summoning Vollkommen a bit easier,no matter how hard it sounds in the first place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Logmon1 Posted January 25, 2008 Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 The last few lines of Floor 0 are VERY confusing. You have a few typos, but I still love these cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted January 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2008 Edit / Bump. Typos fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rentaworrio Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 wat is OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted January 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 wat is OCG? official card grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Logmon1 Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 wat is OCG? official card grammarOr original card game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Final Fantasy Revolution Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 sounds like an ok concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JasonZ Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 Like the cards. Great job. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drawpad Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 10/10. I would kill for a deck wit these cards in it. These are amazing I can not wait to see your next work of art. Good cards, great effects, good playing style. Seems easy to get used to (If real.) I just plain love them 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deadman - ZP Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 wooow..cool & nice cards ;)GOOD job^^+10*** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
achoi2 Posted February 9, 2008 Report Share Posted February 9, 2008 Nice cards but you had some errors, when you say summond, say Normal Summoned, and one more thing you forgot the signature on your cards. I'd give it a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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