2Tsu no kuroi tenshi monsuta

[Kazuma]

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:Lore:Once per turn you can select 1 face-up "Kuroi tenshi" monster on your side of the field and activate 1 of the following effacts, you cannot cunduct your battle phase the turn you activate this effect.
*Gain life points equal to the selected monsters original ATK or DEF.
*Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the monsters original ATK or DEF.
This cards name means"Queen of the Black Angels"
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:Lore:Activate by Sending your entire hand to the Graveyard while you have 10 or more Kuroi tenshi monsters in your Graveyard. Send all cards on the field and in each players hands to the Graveyard. Then you can Special Summon as many "Kuroi tenshi" monsters possible from your Graveyard or deck. (Ignoring the Summoning conditions) Thier effects are negated.
This cards name means"black angel's power"

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

I remember these. Couldn't you have posted them in your original thread?

Card name's are still too long.

Both cards are overpowered.

I shouldn't have thought expansion is necessary, but if you really want, the Queen has BEWD stats, and can do 3000 burn damage a turn, and the trap has the Chaos Dragon effect, plus special summon 5 monsters which will almost certainly result in end game. Discarding hand (which may be 1 card) and effect negation are no price at all for this. The monsters don't even return to the Graveyard at the end of the turn.

Make the Queen Tribute monsters to inflict Damage equal to 1/2 ATK, if this is the strategy you want to go for, total edit of trap needed.

[Kazuma]

O.k. how about this then
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Activate by Sending your entire hand to the Graveyard while you have 10 or more Kuroi tenshi monsters in your Graveyard. Send all cards on the field to the Graveyard. Then you can Special Summon as many "Kuroi tenshi" monsters possible that's removed from play. (Ignoring the Summoning conditions) Their effects are negated. During the End Phase Destroy all monsters Summoned by this effect, then your opponent selects 1 of the destroyed monsters and you take damage equal to the selected monsters Original ATK.
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Once per turn you can Tribute 1 face-up "Kuroi tenshi" monster on your side of the field except this card and activate 1 of the following effects, you cannot conduct your battle phase the turn you activate this effect.
*Gain life points equal to half of the selected monsters original ATK or DEF.
*Inflict damage to your opponent equal to half of the monsters original ATK or DEF.[/spoiler]