Death Assul [5/50]

[The_Harbinger]

[spoiler=Monsters][spoiler= Death Soldier][img]http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/7602/88914.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Micro Swordsman][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/2485/88914o.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=The Darkness King][img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/8184/88914b.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=The Death Knight][img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/7602/88914.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Demon Girl][img]http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/203/88914q.jpg[/img]
Lore:
This card can only be summoed by playing the card "Death Assul Demon Ritual." This card cannot be removed from the field accept by removing it from play. The previous effect can be cancled by tributing 3 spell or trap cards. Only the player who doesn't control this monster can cancel the effect.[/spoiler][/spoiler]
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I'll Have more up tommorow

[Manpole]

"Death Soldier" will need less attack with such a good effect, or maybe increase his Level by 1 or 2?
Also I think its "...destroyed by battle..." not "...destroyed in battle..." not sure though.

On "Darkness King" you should specify where Dark Magician can be summoned from, Graveyard, Deck, either? also you spelled summon wrong, so fix that, and if I'm not mistaken I think summon needs to be capitalized... not sure though. I do know that it needs to be capitalized when using it like, Normal Summon or Special Summon, but just summon by itself... idk for sure.

on "Death Knight" I think you should specify where you can Special Summon those monsters from, just like on "Darkness King"

"Demon Girl" is a little OP kind of like Death Soldier, maybe lower her attack to 2500? idk, also you misspelled summon on this card as well, and you put
"..Death Assul Demon Ritual", did you mean Assault? not sure there because I can't see the ritual card.

Anyways the cards aren't bad, nice work.