Earthbound Immortal Hezekiah (The King of Snakes)

[Master of The Dark]

[img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/228/198311b.jpg[/img]
Effect: There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the Field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This can attack your opponent derictly or Once per turn by discarding one card from your hand this card can destroy an opponents monster by battle and attack once more in the same turn.

[·Toot]

kind of a bland EBI effect

i dont think u need the drawback to attack directly

and the pic could be better

but there aren't really good unused EBI pics

there was a guy who made them but i forgot who he was.

[Master of The Dark]

any ideas on how to make the effect better? and Im looking for someone to fix the pic I tried to do it myself you see how that came out. (Points up to the card.)

[·Toot]

lolz xD
i cant really think of an effect because all EBI cards have bland effects just take out the drawback

[Master of The Dark]

edited the effect what do you think?

[·Toot]

its kinda better but making it able to attack directly twice makes it seem kinda Op'ed u should
either take out the attack directly part or the attack twice part then it'll be an ok effect

[Master of The Dark]

well what if I add a drawback like if this card destroys a monster it can attack once more in the same turn?

[Squirrel Girl]

What is the cards atk? And the effect miss 1 part that EBI monsters need. It miss this effect "this card can attack your oponent directly" good EBI card

[Master of The Dark]

well I wanted the card to be able to attack twice in one turn but two dderict attack is un fair and if you think it can still attack the opponent derectly and deal even more damage.

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

[quote name='King Mew' timestamp='1288283835' post='4744863']
well I wanted the card to be able to attack twice in one turn but two dderict attack is un fair and if you think it can still attack the opponent derectly and deal even more damage.
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Then you can do the direct attack and then put on the card "Once per turn, if this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, it can attack another monster your opponent controls."

[Master of The Dark]

Heres the effect: There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the Field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. If this card destroys an opponents monster by battle it can attack once more in the same turn. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the destroyed Monsters level x100. Remove From Play the destroyed monster.

and as long as there is a monster on my opponents side of the field I can attack the monster and then another monster or my opponent derictly. so I think the effect works well like it is so. an comments on it?

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

[quote name='King Mew' timestamp='1288285785' post='4744925']
Heres the effect: There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the Field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. If this card destroys an opponents monster by battle it can attack once more in the same turn. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the destroyed Monsters level x100. Remove From Play the destroyed monster.

and as long as there is a monster on my opponents side of the field I can attack the monster and then another monster or my opponent derictly. so I think the effect works well like it is so. an comments on it?
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One note, the effect needs to be "once per turn", otherwise it can attack every single monster your opponent controls as long as it destroys them.

[Master of The Dark]

ok. thank you.

[Squirrel Girl]

It will still be able to attack twice. You just have a choice. And the card not follow ebi concept if you not have that effect

[Master of The Dark]

well then how would you put it to give the user the choise between attacking twice and derectly attacking?

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

[quote name='King Mew' timestamp='1288287958' post='4744977']
well then how would you put it to give the user the choise between attacking twice and derectly attacking?
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"This card can attack your opponent directly. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle..."

if you look at the giant he had the direct attack effect and a burn effect when it destroys an opponents monster.

[Master of The Dark]

true so hows this effect work?

There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the Field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the destroyed Monsters level x100. Remove From Play the destroyed monster.

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

I thought it was going to be able to attack twice?

[Master of The Dark]

ah Im starting to get crap in an rp for having this card and it be to op'ed because it can attack twice and it burns cards aswell. so I decided to go this way.


Can some one help me make this cards effect right for this card?

[Master of The Dark]

[img]http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/8854/198311.jpg[/img]
effect 1: There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the Field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target.Once per turn if this card destroys an opponents monster by battle it can attack once more in the same turn. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the destroyed Monsters level x100. Remove From Play the destroyed monster.

effect 2: There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the Field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target.Once per turn if this card destroys an opponents monster by battle it can attack once more in the same turn. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the destroyed Monsters level x100.

effect 3: There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the Field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This can attack your opponent derictly or Once per turn by discarding one card from your hand this card can destroy an opponents monster by battle and attack once more in the same turn.

effect 4 normal effect for an EBI: There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the Field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. this card can attack your opponent derictly.



Witch effect fits best with the card?


Hey you guy looking and read can you give me your opinions on the effects?

[shredder101]

[quote name='iRiolu!' timestamp='1288279501' post='4744749']
kind of a bland EBI effect

i dont think u need the drawback to attack directly

and the pic could be better

but there aren't really good unused EBI pics

there was a guy who made them but i forgot who he was.
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hold up, people MAKE these? i just image search.

[Master of The Dark]

I have the image already now this is an effect descution thread.

[Master of The Dark]

finally have the pic and the effect so it's back on my first post.

[Master of The Dark]

bump

[Lexadin]

It misses the typical EBI effect.
[spoiler=Typical Ebi effect]
[i]There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the Field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly.[/i]
[/spoiler]

Also I don't really like the choice, imo it should have both thhe double attack effect and the direct attack effect.

Also thi pic is so not EBI.

A 6/10