Ghoulish Posted October 29, 2010 Report Share Posted October 29, 2010 Hey, this is my first card in a long time, you may remember me as "Maadd1" even if you may not want to lol. I've made many many cards on my time here and have had a long break and spent my time in the RP section, anyway here's my latest card Cross Dimension Dragon, please leave comments on where to improve, what you like about it and what you don't like about it, thankyou. [center][size="4"][b]"The dragon that ventures through the many dimensions"[/b][/size] [spoiler= Pic Credit] Credit to Jazin Kay [/spoiler] [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/4632/213134.jpg[/img] [spoiler= Card Effect] 1 Dragon-Type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Monster(s) When this card is Synchro Summoned, activate one of the following effects: - Remove one monster on the field from play, during your opponent's 2nd Standby Phase after this effect, return the monster to your opponent's hand. - Return 2 of your removed from play monsters to your Graveyard, remove 2 monsters in your opponent's Graveyard from play. [/spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted October 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2010 first card in a while would like some feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 29, 2010 Report Share Posted October 29, 2010 It's actually a pretty decent card. I might see it being added to Dragunities. One OCG error though, [i]one[/i] = [i]1[/i]. It's ballanced, though it's ATK could be slightly lower. There are only 2 things I don't like about it, #1 is it's a Synchro, but I can accept that. #2 is it has a imo pretty bad pic. So a 8.8/10, should be fitting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted October 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2010 thx for the comment I see what you mean about the pic, seems a little to cartoony i think, yea i might drop the star level by 1 and decreae the ATK to 2400 maybe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 29, 2010 Report Share Posted October 29, 2010 Well you should imo keep it a Lvl 7, YGO doesn't have enough Lvl 7 monsters imo. But 2400 ATK sounds good imo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted October 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2010 yea true, i'll probably change it later on anyway thx for the critique Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted October 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghoulish Posted October 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2010 bump seriousely? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xenon0 Posted October 29, 2010 Report Share Posted October 29, 2010 Well this card would definitly have a slot in my deck if they had a such thing as D.D Tuner..... i feel a new card coming along Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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