Infernice Drago of Mirage

[lewis atherton]

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cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 Pyro-Type monster and one Aqua-Type monster in your Graveyard from play, and Tributing one Dragon monster from your side of the field. Once per turn you may pay 1000 Life points to destroy as many cards on the field to less equel or less of the Level of monsters combined to Summon this card.

[Lexadin]

OCG fix: This card can[b]not[/b] [s]only[/s] be [b]Special [/b]Summoned [b]except[/b] by removing 1 Pyro[b]-Type[/b] [s]monster [/s]and [b]1[/b] Aqua[b]-Type[/b] monster [b]in[/b] your Graveyard from play[s],[/s] and Tributing [b]1[/b] Dragon[b]-Type[/b] monster [b]you control[/b]. Once per duel[b],[/b] you [s]may[/s] [b]can [/b]pay 1000 Life [b]P[/b]oints to destroy cards on the field, up to the combined Levels of the Monsters used to Special Summon this card. [s]If this effct is used this card may not attack during the same turn. [/s]

Well I scrapped the last effect so it can actuallty inflict some damage in the one time you used this effect.

Tbh, this card reminds me of an almost UP JD (which is broken anyways). Pehaps you could scrap the "[i]Once per duel[/i]" part and replace it with "[i]Once per turn[/i]" to make this card worth running. Seeing as triple Type Decks are quite hard to run.

A 7/10

[lewis atherton]

yeeah, i see your point actually i agree with you but by removing cards from the graveyard and only 1 summon i was thinking i may be overpowered thats why i added once per duel

[Lexadin]

But of you just look at [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Judgment_Dragon"]JD here[/url]. You'll see that you card is quite ballanced with the triple type requerments. Compared to already existing cards. Of course Konami isn't known for its ballanced cards, so that might not be the best example, but noone would run this for a Once a Duel effect.

[lewis atherton]

ok I have edited it now to make it more balanced with much better OCG let me know your new opinion or how you think i could improve it everyone.

[lewis atherton]

bump

[snowyash]

I think you should completely drop the once per duel thing, once a turn maybe but I think you need to establish a line between the card attacking or using the effect. Prioritize one and change accordingly. Stats should also reflect this - if you'd rather attack, keep the stats as is, for effects, drop them a bit so there is more emphasis on using the effects.

I think the summoning conditions are potentially awkward, I'd suggest Attributes rather than Types. Picture isn't great and the OCG could use work.

[lewis atherton]

I like the picture otherwise i wouldn't have used it so i dis agree with that beibg a fair comment and i realise that it's akward to summon hense why its so strong, also its a Level 8 monster so i should be powerful.

bump

[lewis atherton]

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[lewis atherton]

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