Fish!

[BananaJoe]

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[LiAM]

It looks fair and balanced enough, just a little underpowered.

Essentially a one tribute Mystical Space Typhoon.

To me, I don't see it worth Tributing a monster and losing this one to destroy 1 S/T.

Might be worth it with a Level 4 etc. Like the Warrior card that destroys a monster when Tributed.

[lewis atherton]

ok since you have clearly tried something new 7/10

Ok like the card a lot really good picture, and we need more fish however i would be more likely to call it a sea-serpent.

So your main problem is the fact that is is underpowered, in my opinion good for the first/original series of cards but now it just wouldn't match up to some of the better cards out their.

You have also give it a water atribute, makes sence for a fish however the picture is teling me - dark atribute.

It's attack is fine if you want to change the effect to make it stronger ie- Tribute this card to destroy 1 card on your opponents side of the field, or perhaps If this card is destroyed in battle destroy one trap or spell card on the field.

If you wanted to keep the effect then i would change its attack to 2300 or maybe a bit lower, however i think 2400 is fair.

The defense applies to the same rules as its a six star monster you could increase it to 1800 - 2200 depending on the effect.

So if i was to edit it

Atriibute - Dark Type Sea-Serpent Level 6 Atc - 2200 Def - 1800

Effect - If this card is destroyed in battle destroy one trap or spell card on the field.

[Inferno I20]

I dont get it, does it tribute itself then destroy a monster? Then why put "Once per turn" since it is going to die anyway therefore no need for "once"

A better and interesting effect would be
"Once per turn you can Tribute this card to destroy 1 face-down Spell or Trap card. During your End Phase, if this card was sent to the Graveyard because of it's effect, you can Special Summon it in face-up Defense Position to your side of the field"

There made it strong and worth summoning and balanced because it only has 1500 DEF. You can also, if you want, switch out "Spell and Trap card" for "monster" (to destroy 1 monster instead). You can make it have only 400 DEF so it will be even more balanced.

my advice here

[Black Metal]

You don't really need the once in it and put a space between trap card. Anyway... 6.5/10

[Archwing]

Name: Excellent, 9/10 for original, not to long, and a uncommon word
Pic:The pic is great, 9/10 Kinda spooky, Fits the name all that sweet jazz
OCG: Well im not great with OCG but you missed the "e" in "one" the space between "Trap" and "Card" Also Spell and Trap should be capitalized, I dont count OCG to the overall score so ill just say its fine other than that
Effect:Bit short but okay 6/10 Very basic, nothing wrong with that but its not original
Balance:Lv 6 and only 2100 ATK and 1500 DEF? I think you could get away with this being 5 stars or a bit more ATK and DEF.
The little Extras:The Edition isnt on it and the set number is funny but whatever, its still impressive for your number of posts

Your overall Grade is
[color="#4169E1"][size="4"]B-[/size][/color] Its definatly above average but could use a little work on the effect. You have plenty of potential, keep it up