Shalltear Bloodfallen Posted October 30, 2010 Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 [img]http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/9516/153786.jpg[/img] [Spoiler=Effect]Once per turn when your opponent Summon a monster, you can Special-Summon a Demon Token to your side of the field in Defence Position. The level, ATK and DEF of the Token is equal to that of your opponents monster. When your opponents monster is destroyed, the Token is also destroyed. When this card is destroyed, destroy all Tokens summoned by this effect.[/spoiler] Thoughts? I´m aware that the OCG might be a little of so correction is appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
demonninja44 Posted October 30, 2010 Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 cool trap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Death412 Posted October 30, 2010 Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 Nice idea, but completely, utterly, and diametrically opposite of fairness. how about '"destroy the Demon Token at your opponents End phase?" (P.S. Awesome Pic) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shalltear Bloodfallen Posted October 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 Changed the effect. The idea is that all monster cards have a dark side and this trap forces them out, so I thought these drawbacks were appropriate. I hope its better now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Death412 Posted October 30, 2010 Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 Brilliant. i know a novice cardmaker like myself is slightly annoying, but truly, the effect change fixes it all. it's just that (with the previous effect) your opponent might summon a "blue-eyes white Dragon. then you've got one too. it WAS unfair. Now it's better. great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shalltear Bloodfallen Posted October 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 No it´s fine. All opinions are welcome and appreciated + we were all novices once . I´m just glad people commented + that they seeme to like it. On a side note, Welcome to YCM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_of_Cards_55 Posted October 30, 2010 Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 Nice card and good idea!^^ But there is a bit of writing at the bottom of the pic. If you don't crop that, advanced users like me will keep criticizing u for it. Just a warning that u should crop that image and that card would be perfect!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Death412 Posted October 30, 2010 Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shalltear Bloodfallen Posted October 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2010 [quote name='Acecardman22' timestamp='1288468741' post='4750295'] Nice card and good idea!^^ But there is a bit of writing at the bottom of the pic. If you don't crop that, advanced users like me will keep criticizing u for it. Just a warning that u should crop that image and that card would be perfect!!!! [/quote] I was aware of that detail in the pic but I did not want to start croping it in risk of ruining the pic (+I was lazy ). I did however remove that part in the new card pic and I guess this version will stay up unless I find a better version of the pic and withouth writing. (The pic is from DeviantART and I guess the creator added that detail so people wouldn´t be able to claim it as their own) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shalltear Bloodfallen Posted October 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2010 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_of_Cards_55 Posted October 31, 2010 Report Share Posted October 31, 2010 Ah i see the new version!^^ Nice crop! Ill give it a whopping 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shalltear Bloodfallen Posted November 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2010 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sylphiend Posted November 1, 2010 Report Share Posted November 1, 2010 Looks like a stronger "Cloning". 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted November 1, 2010 Report Share Posted November 1, 2010 [font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]Once per turn when your opponent Summon[b]s[/b] a monster, you can Special Summon a Demon Token [b](?-Type/DARK*/Level ?/ATK ?/DEF ?)[/b] to your side of the field in Defen[b]s[/b]e Position. The [b]L[/b]evel, ATK and DEF of the Token is equal to your opponent monster's. When your opponent's monster is destroyed, the Token is also destroyed. When this card is destroyed, destroy all Tokens [b]S[/b]ummoned by this effect.[/font] [font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif] [/font] [font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif][b]*[/b]I take for granted their Attribute would be DARK, right?[/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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