Mercenary Cards (My first post in about 6 or 7 months)

[Iceydude168]

Sorry I haven't been on for a while, so my OCG/TCG/Whatever they call it now is bound to be rusty. The picture is awful, I know, so don't rate it please. It's the effect that I'm working on.
Here it is: [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/8886/218618.jpg[/img]
Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by paying 1000 Life Points. Each time this card attacks, you must pay 500 Life Points. If you do not pay 500 Life Points, return this card to your hand and inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent's LIfe Points. When this card is destroyed, destroy 2 cards your opponent controls and return one card you control to your hand.
Odd effect, I know, but I'm working on it!

[Manpole]

As you said, the pic is bad.
The effect is very OP in my opinion, takes 1000 Life Points to Special Summon a 3000 ATK monster with no tributes (so it still allows a normal summon) when other cards such as Mausoleum of the Emperor, and Starblast woul make you pay 2000 Life Points for a card with equal ATK. And if you don't pay the Life Points to keep him on the field you hurt your opponent...? how about this card is destroyed. And its last effect just adds to how strong this card is, if your opponent happens to kill it, you get to destroy 2 of their cards? When the discarding 1 card to your hand isn't as bad (especially if its a flip effect monster)

I would change the effect of hurting your opponent by 500, and maybe only destroy 1 card your opponent controls - this way its not as OP and you roughly still have the same effects here.

Could come out to be a nice card when you find a pic and make some minor adjustments to his effect. Keep working!

[Matt O]

over powered reduce the attack down to 2000 att as you can get 4 start monsters with attack as much as this other than that a good 7/10